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	==Story Development==		==Story Development==
	{{StoryDevelopment\|links= [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Bill\|Bill]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler's father~~\|Matthew Smithson~~]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Mass manipulation\|Mass manipulation]]}}		{{StoryDevelopment\|links= [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Bill\|Bill]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Matthew Smithson\|Chandler's father]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Mass manipulation\|Mass manipulation]]}}

	==Synopsis==		==Synopsis==

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Story Development: SPOILER, SPOILER, SPOILER...screw it, I only have one subscriber

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	==Story Development==		==Story Development==
	{{StoryDevelopment\|links= [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Bill\|Bill]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler's father\|~~Chandler's~~ ~~father~~]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Mass manipulation\|Mass manipulation]]}}		{{StoryDevelopment\|links= [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Bill\|Bill]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler's father\|Matthew Smithson]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Mass manipulation\|Mass manipulation]]}}

	==Synopsis==		==Synopsis==

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	Dredger answers, ''"No."''		Dredger answers, ''"No."''

	Noh says, ''"Call in the ~~calvary~~ and'' fight ''him. Whatever you do, '''don't kill him'''. Stand down. You know where to meet me after the battle."''		Noh says, ''"Call in the cavalry and'' fight ''him. Whatever you do, '''don't kill him'''. Stand down. You know where to meet me after the battle."''

	''"Yes, sir."''		''"Yes, sir."''

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	\| last = [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Volume One/Chapter Three\|Déjà Vu]]		\| last = [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Volume One/Chapter Three\|Déjà Vu]]
			\| next = [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Volume One/Chapter Five\|Blood]]
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	}}		}}
	==Summary==		==Summary==

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	Still healing from the burns, Chandler runs to his car. He drives into Dredger and then flees. Dredger shifts to heal his injuries. Pyro and Dredger hop in the car and chase after Chandler. Pyro sideswipes Chandler's car and tries to light the fuel tank on fire. Chandler registers his displeasure, shoots Pyro's tires with his sidearm and escapes.		Still healing from the burns, Chandler runs to his car. He drives into Dredger and then flees. Dredger shifts to heal his injuries. Pyro and Dredger hop in the car and chase after Chandler. Pyro sideswipes Chandler's car and tries to light the fuel tank on fire. Chandler registers his displeasure, shoots Pyro's tires with his sidearm and escapes.

	Meanwhile, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Lord Noh\|Lord Noh]] [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Flight\|flies]] to the gas station. A ~~worker~~ complains and says he will call the police. Noh [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Telekinesis\|holds]] the man's mouth shut and calls Dredger on his phone, saying, ''"Did you get him?"''		Meanwhile, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Lord Noh\|Lord Noh]] [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Flight\|flies]] to the gas station. An [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Bill\|attendant]] complains and says he will call the police. Noh [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Telekinesis\|holds]] the man's mouth shut and calls Dredger on his phone, saying, ''"Did you get him?"''

	Dredger answers, ''"No."''		Dredger answers, ''"No."''
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	''"Yes, sir."''		''"Yes, sir."''

	Noh crushes the gas station, ~~employees~~, and customers to eliminate the witnesses and evidence.		Noh crushes the gas station, attendants, and customers to eliminate the witnesses and evidence.

	Chandler pulls out his phone and calls his father, saying, ''"Dad, I don't think I'm gonna make it for dinner."''		Chandler pulls out his phone and calls his father, saying, ''"Dad, I don't think I'm gonna make it for dinner."''

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	*[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Dredger\|Dredger]] (2)		*[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Dredger\|Dredger]] (2)
	*[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Lord Noh\|Lord Noh]] (4)		*[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Lord Noh\|Lord Noh]] (4)
			*'''[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Bill\|Bill]]''' (1)

	{{User:Boycool42/NavBar}}		{{User:Boycool42/NavBar}}

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	[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyro\|Pyro]] and [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Dredger\|Dredger]] exit the Humvee. Pyro [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyrokinesis\|throws flames]] at Chandler, but Chandler picks up a car as a shield. He then throws the car at Pyro. Dredger [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Mass manipulation\|grows]] and blocks the car. He enlarges his muscles and attacks Chandler. Chandler fights him with [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Enhanced physicality\|enhanced strength, speed, and agility]]. He kicks Dredger and breaks his knees. Pyro uses a new aspect of pyrokinesis, spontaneous combustion, to fight off Chandler and save Dredger.		[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyro\|Pyro]] and [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Dredger\|Dredger]] exit the Humvee. Pyro [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyrokinesis\|throws flames]] at Chandler, but Chandler picks up a car as a shield. He then throws the car at Pyro. Dredger [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Mass manipulation\|grows]] and blocks the car. He enlarges his muscles and attacks Chandler. Chandler fights him with [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Enhanced physicality\|enhanced strength, speed, and agility]]. He kicks Dredger and breaks his knees. Pyro uses a new aspect of pyrokinesis, spontaneous combustion, to fight off Chandler and save Dredger.

	Still healing from the burns, Chandler runs to his car. He drives into Dredger and then flees. Dredger shifts to heal his injuries. Pyro and Dredger hop in the car and ~~tyr to~~ chase after Chandler. Pyro sideswipes Chandler's car and tries to light the fuel tank on fire. Chandler registers his displeasure, shoots Pyro's tires with his sidearm and escapes.		Still healing from the burns, Chandler runs to his car. He drives into Dredger and then flees. Dredger shifts to heal his injuries. Pyro and Dredger hop in the car and chase after Chandler. Pyro sideswipes Chandler's car and tries to light the fuel tank on fire. Chandler registers his displeasure, shoots Pyro's tires with his sidearm and escapes.

	Meanwhile, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Lord Noh\|Lord Noh]] [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Flight\|flies]] to the gas station. A worker complains and says he will call the police. Noh [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Telekinesis\|holds]] the man's mouth shut and calls Dredger on his phone, saying, ''"Did you get him?"''		Meanwhile, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Lord Noh\|Lord Noh]] [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Flight\|flies]] to the gas station. A worker complains and says he will call the police. Noh [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Telekinesis\|holds]] the man's mouth shut and calls Dredger on his phone, saying, ''"Did you get him?"''

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	Four weeks ago, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler]] drives his car on a trip to visit his family in Florida. He stops at a gas station. After he fills up the gas tank, he goes inside to get sodas and beef jerky. He sees a black [[Wikipedia:Hummer\|Humvee]] coming towards him and jumps out of the way. It crashes into a small car near him.		Four weeks ago, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler]] drives his car on a trip to visit his family in Florida. He stops at a gas station. After he fills up the gas tank, he goes inside to get sodas and beef jerky. He sees a black [[Wikipedia:Hummer\|Humvee]] coming towards him and jumps out of the way. It crashes into a small car near him.

	[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyro\|Pyro]] and [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Dredger\|Dredger]] exit the Humvee. Pyro [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyrokinesis\|throws flames]] at ~~Chadnler~~, but Chandler picks up a car as a shield. He then throws the car at Pyro. Dredger [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Mass manipulation\|grows]] and blocks the car. He enlarges his muscles and attacks Chandler. Chandler fights him with [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Enhanced physicality\|enhanced strength, speed, and agility]]. He kicks Dredger and breaks his knees. Pyro uses a new aspect of pyrokinesis, spontaneous combustion, to fight off Chandler and save Dredger.		[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyro\|Pyro]] and [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Dredger\|Dredger]] exit the Humvee. Pyro [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyrokinesis\|throws flames]] at Chandler, but Chandler picks up a car as a shield. He then throws the car at Pyro. Dredger [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Mass manipulation\|grows]] and blocks the car. He enlarges his muscles and attacks Chandler. Chandler fights him with [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Enhanced physicality\|enhanced strength, speed, and agility]]. He kicks Dredger and breaks his knees. Pyro uses a new aspect of pyrokinesis, spontaneous combustion, to fight off Chandler and save Dredger.

	Still healing from the burns, Chandler runs to his car. He drives into Dredger and then flees. Dredger shifts to heal his injuries. Pyro and Dredger hop in the car and tyr to chase after Chandler. Pyro sideswipes Chandler's car and tries to light the fuel tank on fire. Chandler registers his displeasure, shoots Pyro's tires with his sidearm and escapes.		Still healing from the burns, Chandler runs to his car. He drives into Dredger and then flees. Dredger shifts to heal his injuries. Pyro and Dredger hop in the car and tyr to chase after Chandler. Pyro sideswipes Chandler's car and tries to light the fuel tank on fire. Chandler registers his displeasure, shoots Pyro's tires with his sidearm and escapes.

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 ** [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler Smithson|Chandler]] goes on vacation to visit his family.
 ** [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyro|Pyro]] begins his final test, with the help of [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Dredger|Dredger]].  Dredger has other plans.
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 *[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler Smithson|Chandler Smithson]] (4)