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	==Synopsis==		==Synopsis==
	[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler Smithson]] is sprinting through the suburbs. It is in the middle of a rainy night and pitch black outside. He finds a bicycle chained to a stop sign, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Enhanced physicality\|rips]] it from the chains, and starts to ride it.		In the near future, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler Smithson]] is sprinting through the suburbs. It is in the middle of a rainy night and pitch black outside. He finds a bicycle chained to a stop sign, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Enhanced physicality\|rips]] it from the chains, and starts to ride it.

	Four feet are seen running through puddles.		Four feet are seen running through puddles.

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	{{blurb}}When you die, your life doesn’t flash before your eyes. Time just slows to a crawl. The mind wanders, and that moment is yours. Repent…regret…And either by the grace of God, or the hand of the devil, my moment’s been extended.<br>{{blurbclose}}		{{blurb}}When you die, your life doesn’t flash before your eyes. Time just slows to a crawl. The mind wanders, and that moment is yours. Repent…regret…And either by the grace of God, or the hand of the devil, my moment’s been extended.<br>{{blurbclose}}

	Six weeks earlier, Chandler walks into a ~~bank…~~		Six weeks earlier, Chandler walks into a bank.

			'''To be continued...'''

	==Character Appearances==		==Character Appearances==

imported>Boycool42 at 12:36, 7 April 2010

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	\| next = [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Volume One/Chapter Two\|The Bank]]		\| next = [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Volume One/Chapter Two\|The Bank]]
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	{{blurb}}For years [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Lord Noh\|Lord Noh]] has been the most powerful in a world of those powerful. But what does he do when he reaches the final years of his life? How does this relate to the final ''moments'' of [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler Smithson\|''Chandler'']]'s life?<br>{{blurbclose}}

	==Summary==		==Summary==
	* In the ~~last~~ moments of his life, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler Smithson]] reflects on the events that brought him there.		* In the final moments of his life, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler Smithson]] reflects on the events that brought him there.
	** Six weeks earlier, Chandler first encounters a mysterious figure, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Lord Noh\|Lord Noh]], and his [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyro\|apprentice]].		** Six weeks earlier, Chandler first encounters a mysterious figure, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Lord Noh\|Lord Noh]], and his [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyro\|apprentice]].

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	==Synopsis==		==Synopsis==
	~~Six weeks in the future,~~ [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler Smithson]] is sprinting through the suburbs. It is in the middle of a rainy night and pitch black outside. He finds a bicycle chained to a stop sign, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Enhanced physicality\|rips]] it from the chains, and starts to ride it.		[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler Smithson]] is sprinting through the suburbs. It is in the middle of a rainy night and pitch black outside. He finds a bicycle chained to a stop sign, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Enhanced physicality\|rips]] it from the chains, and starts to ride it.

	Four feet are seen running through puddles.		Four feet are seen running through puddles.
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	{{blurb}}When you die, your life doesn’t flash before your eyes. Time just slows to a crawl. The mind wanders, and that moment is yours. Repent…regret…And either by the grace of God, or the hand of the devil, my moment’s been extended.<br>{{blurbclose}}		{{blurb}}When you die, your life doesn’t flash before your eyes. Time just slows to a crawl. The mind wanders, and that moment is yours. Repent…regret…And either by the grace of God, or the hand of the devil, my moment’s been extended.<br>{{blurbclose}}

	In ~~present~~ ~~day~~, Chandler walks into a bank…		Six weeks earlier, Chandler walks into a bank…

	==Character Appearances==		==Character Appearances==

imported>Boycool42 at 00:37, 7 April 2010

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			{{blurb}}For years [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Lord Noh\|Lord Noh]] has been the most powerful in a world of those powerful. But what does he do when he reaches the final years of his life? How does this relate to the final ''moments'' of [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler Smithson\|''Chandler'']]'s life?<br>{{blurbclose}}

	==Summary==		==Summary==
	* In the last moments of his life, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler Smithson]] reflects on the events that brought him there.		* In the last moments of his life, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler Smithson]] reflects on the events that brought him there.

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⚫	{{blurb}}When you die, your life doesn’t flash before your eyes. Time just slows to a crawl. The mind wanders, and that moment is yours. Repent…regret…And either by the grace of God, or the hand of the devil, my moment’s been extended.<br>{{blurbclose}}

	==Summary==		==Summary==
	* In the last moments of his life, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler Smithson]] reflects on the events that brought him there.		* In the last moments of his life, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler Smithson]] reflects on the events that brought him there.
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	Chandler’s life flashes before his eyes.		Chandler’s life flashes before his eyes.

		⚫	{{blurb}}When you die, your life doesn’t flash before your eyes. Time just slows to a crawl. The mind wanders, and that moment is yours. Repent…regret…And either by the grace of God, or the hand of the devil, my moment’s been extended.<br>{{blurbclose}}

	In present day, Chandler walks into a bank…		In present day, Chandler walks into a bank…

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	\| chapter = One		\| chapter = One
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	{{blurb}}When you die, your life doesn’t flash before your eyes. Time just slows to a crawl. The mind wanders, and that moment is yours. Repent…regret…And either by the grace of God, or the hand of the devil, my moment’s been extended.<br>{{blurbclose}}		{{blurb}}When you die, your life doesn’t flash before your eyes. Time just slows to a crawl. The mind wanders, and that moment is yours. Repent…regret…And either by the grace of God, or the hand of the devil, my moment’s been extended.<br>{{blurbclose}}
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	==Story Development==		==Story Development==
	{{StoryDevelopment\|links= [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler Smithson]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Enhanced physicality\|Enhanced physicality]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyrokinesis\|Pyrokinesis]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Telekinesis\|Telekinesis]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Lord Noh\|Lord Noh]] · [[User:Boycool42/Pyro\|Pyro]]}}		{{StoryDevelopment\|links= [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler Smithson]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Enhanced physicality\|Enhanced physicality]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyrokinesis\|Pyrokinesis]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Telekinesis\|Telekinesis]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Lord Noh\|Lord Noh]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyro\|Pyro]]}}

	==Synopsis==		==Synopsis==
	Six weeks in the future, [[User:Boycool42/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler Smithson]] is sprinting through the suburbs. It is in the middle of a rainy night and pitch black outside. He finds a bicycle chained to a stop sign, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Enhanced physicality\|rips]] it from the chains, and starts to ride it.		Six weeks in the future, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler Smithson]] is sprinting through the suburbs. It is in the middle of a rainy night and pitch black outside. He finds a bicycle chained to a stop sign, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Enhanced physicality\|rips]] it from the chains, and starts to ride it.

	Four feet are seen running through puddles.		Four feet are seen running through puddles.

	Chandler hits a curb and falls off the bicycle. When [[User:Boycool42/Lord Noh\|one of the men]] catches up with him, Chandler wields the bicycle as a weapon and whacks the man several yards.		Chandler hits a curb and falls off the bicycle. When [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Lord Noh\|one of the men]] catches up with him, Chandler wields the bicycle as a weapon and whacks the man several yards.

	Chandler, carrying the mangled bicycle, runs and climbs up the outside wall of a house. He tosses the bicycle and jumps through the window, just dodging a [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyrokinesis\|blast of flames]].		Chandler, carrying the mangled bicycle, runs and climbs up the outside wall of a house. He tosses the bicycle and jumps through the window, just dodging a [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyrokinesis\|blast of flames]].

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	==Summary==		==Summary==
	* In the last moments of his life, [[User:Boycool42/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler Smithson]] reflects on the events that brought him there.		* In the last moments of his life, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler Smithson]] reflects on the events that brought him there.
	** Six weeks earlier, Chandler first encounters a mysterious figure, [[User:Boycool42/Lord Noh\|Lord Noh]], and his [[User:Boycool42/Pyro\|apprentice]].		** Six weeks earlier, Chandler first encounters a mysterious figure, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Lord Noh\|Lord Noh]], and his [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyro\|apprentice]].


	==Story Development==		==Story Development==
	{{StoryDevelopment\|links= [[User:Boycool42/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler Smithson]] · [[User:Boycool42/Enhanced physicality\|Enhanced physicality]] · [[User:Boycool42/Pyrokinesis\|Pyrokinesis]] · [[User:Boycool42/Telekinesis\|Telekinesis]] · [[User:Boycool42/Lord Noh\|Lord Noh]] · [[User:Boycool42/Pyro\|Pyro]]}}		{{StoryDevelopment\|links= [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler Smithson]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Enhanced physicality\|Enhanced physicality]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyrokinesis\|Pyrokinesis]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Telekinesis\|Telekinesis]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Lord Noh\|Lord Noh]] · [[User:Boycool42/Pyro\|Pyro]]}}

	==Synopsis==		==Synopsis==
	Six weeks in the future, [[User:Boycool42/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler Smithson]] is sprinting through the suburbs. It is in the middle of a rainy night and pitch black outside. He finds a bicycle chained to a stop sign, [[User:Boycool42/Enhanced physicality\|rips]] it from the chains, and starts to ride it.		Six weeks in the future, [[User:Boycool42/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler Smithson]] is sprinting through the suburbs. It is in the middle of a rainy night and pitch black outside. He finds a bicycle chained to a stop sign, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Enhanced physicality\|rips]] it from the chains, and starts to ride it.

	Four feet are seen running through puddles.		Four feet are seen running through puddles.
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	Chandler hits a curb and falls off the bicycle. When [[User:Boycool42/Lord Noh\|one of the men]] catches up with him, Chandler wields the bicycle as a weapon and whacks the man several yards.		Chandler hits a curb and falls off the bicycle. When [[User:Boycool42/Lord Noh\|one of the men]] catches up with him, Chandler wields the bicycle as a weapon and whacks the man several yards.

	Chandler, carrying the mangled bicycle, runs and climbs up the outside wall of a house. He tosses the bicycle and jumps through the window, just dodging a [[User:Boycool42/Pyrokinesis\|blast of flames]].		Chandler, carrying the mangled bicycle, runs and climbs up the outside wall of a house. He tosses the bicycle and jumps through the window, just dodging a [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyrokinesis\|blast of flames]].

	Chandler stands in the house, breathing heavily. The bedroom door [[User:Boycool42/Telekinesis\|blasts]] in. Chandler says, “What do you want with me?” An older man with a metal cane limps in. A tall young man walks in and holds out his hand to use his power. He finds that he is unable to do anything. He yells, “What did you do?!” He angrily pulls out a handgun, aims the gun at Chandler’s head, and hesitates. Then he pulls the trigger!		Chandler stands in the house, breathing heavily. The bedroom door [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Telekinesis\|blasts]] in. Chandler says, “What do you want with me?” An older man with a metal cane limps in. A tall young man walks in and holds out his hand to use his power. He finds that he is unable to do anything. He yells, “What did you do?!” He angrily pulls out a handgun, aims the gun at Chandler’s head, and hesitates. Then he pulls the trigger!

	Chandler’s life flashes before his eyes.		Chandler’s life flashes before his eyes.
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	==Character Appearances==		==Character Appearances==
	*[[User:Boycool42/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler Smithson]]		*'''[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler Smithson]]''' (1)
	*[[User:Boycool42/Lord Noh\|Lord Noh]]		*'''[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Lord Noh\|Lord Noh]]''' (1)
	*[[User:Boycool42/Pyro\|Pyro]]		*'''[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyro\|Pyro]]''' (1)

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imported>Boycool42: User:Boycool42/Apprentice/Volume One/Chapter One moved to User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Volume One/Chapter One

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User:Boycool42/Apprentice/Volume One/Chapter One moved to User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Volume One/Chapter One

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