User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Volume One/Chapter Two - Revision history

imported>Boycool42 at 00:20, 11 May 2010

2010-05-11T00:20:07Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 00:20, 11 May 2010
(No difference)

imported>Boycool42 at 00:20, 11 May 2010

2010-05-11T00:20:07Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 00:20, 11 May 2010
Line 16:		Line 16:
	==Summary==		==Summary==
	* In the final moments of his life, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler]] remembers his first encounter with his murderers.		* In the final moments of his life, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler]] remembers his first encounter with his murderers.
	** Six weeks ~~ago~~, Chandler has an interesting experience in a bank.		** Six weeks earlier, Chandler has an interesting experience in a bank.
	** The mysterious [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Lord Noh\|Lord Noh]] tests his [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyro\|apprentice]] to see if he is ready to succeed him.		** The mysterious [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Lord Noh\|Lord Noh]] tests his [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyro\|apprentice]] to see if he is ready to succeed him.

imported>Boycool42 at 12:34, 8 May 2010

2010-05-08T12:34:17Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 12:34, 8 May 2010
Line 10:		Line 10:
	\| editedby =		\| editedby =
	\| last = [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Volume One/Chapter One\|My Life]]		\| last = [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Volume One/Chapter One\|My Life]]
	\| next = [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Volume One/Chapter ~~Two~~\|Déjà Vu]]		\| next = [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Volume One/Chapter Three\|Déjà Vu]]
	}}		}}
	{{blurb}}Here I am – chased and beaten. A .50 caliber bullet is lingering an inch from my head. This is my final moment to reflect. I ask myself, “How did I get here?”<br>{{blurbclose}}		{{blurb}}Here I am – chased and beaten. A .50 caliber bullet is lingering an inch from my head. This is my final moment to reflect. I ask myself, “How did I get here?”<br>{{blurbclose}}

imported>Boycool42 at 12:33, 8 May 2010

2010-05-08T12:33:36Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 12:33, 8 May 2010
Line 10:		Line 10:
	\| editedby =		\| editedby =
	\| last = [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Volume One/Chapter One\|My Life]]		\| last = [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Volume One/Chapter One\|My Life]]
			\| next = [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Volume One/Chapter Two\|Déjà Vu]]
	\| next =
	}}		}}
	{{blurb}}Here I am – chased and beaten. A .50 caliber bullet is lingering an inch from my head. This is my final moment to reflect. I ask myself, “How did I get here?”<br>{{blurbclose}}		{{blurb}}Here I am – chased and beaten. A .50 caliber bullet is lingering an inch from my head. This is my final moment to reflect. I ask myself, “How did I get here?”<br>{{blurbclose}}

imported>Boycool42 at 11:19, 13 April 2010

2010-04-13T11:19:48Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 11:19, 13 April 2010
Line 20:		Line 20:

	==Story Development==		==Story Development==
	{{StoryDevelopment\|links= [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chicago National Bank\|Chicago National Bank]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Flight\|Flight]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Elizabeth\|Elizabeth Castle]]}}		{{StoryDevelopment\|links= [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chicago National Bank\|Chicago National Bank]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Flight\|Flight]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Elizabeth Castle\|Elizabeth Castle]]}}

	==Synopsis==		==Synopsis==
Line 50:		Line 50:
	*[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Lord Noh\|Lord Noh]] (2)		*[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Lord Noh\|Lord Noh]] (2)
	*[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyro\|Pyro]] (2)		*[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyro\|Pyro]] (2)
	*'''[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Elizabeth Castle\|Elizabeth]]''' (1)		*'''[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Elizabeth Castle\|Elizabeth Castle]]''' (1)

	{{User:Boycool42/NavBar}}		{{User:Boycool42/NavBar}}

imported>Boycool42: /* Story Development */

2010-04-13T11:19:13Z

Story Development

← Older revision		Revision as of 11:19, 13 April 2010
Line 20:		Line 20:

	==Story Development==		==Story Development==
	{{StoryDevelopment\|links= [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chicago National Bank\|Chicago National Bank]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Flight\|Flight]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Elizabeth\|Elizabeth]]}}		{{StoryDevelopment\|links= [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chicago National Bank\|Chicago National Bank]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Flight\|Flight]] · [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Elizabeth\|Elizabeth Castle]]}}

	==Synopsis==		==Synopsis==

imported>Boycool42: /* Character Appearances */

2010-04-12T22:04:30Z

Character Appearances

← Older revision		Revision as of 22:04, 12 April 2010
Line 50:		Line 50:
	*[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Lord Noh\|Lord Noh]] (2)		*[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Lord Noh\|Lord Noh]] (2)
	*[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyro\|Pyro]] (2)		*[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyro\|Pyro]] (2)
	*'''[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Elizabeth\|Elizabeth]]''' (1)		*'''[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Elizabeth Castle\|Elizabeth]]''' (1)

	{{User:Boycool42/NavBar}}		{{User:Boycool42/NavBar}}

imported>Boycool42: /* Synopsis */

2010-04-12T11:10:39Z

Synopsis

← Older revision		Revision as of 11:10, 12 April 2010
Line 43:		Line 43:

	Just as Chandler is about to says, Pyro walks through the door and yells, ''"Everybody on the ground!!!"'' He then [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyrokinesis\|blasts flames]] at the people in the bank, scaring them and making them cower to the ground. Pyro walks to the safe and uses a controlled blast to melt the lock off. Chandler says that he has to do something about this. He grabs his sidearm and runs up to arrest Pyro. Pyro sees him out of the corner of his eye and lights Chandler on fire...		Just as Chandler is about to says, Pyro walks through the door and yells, ''"Everybody on the ground!!!"'' He then [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyrokinesis\|blasts flames]] at the people in the bank, scaring them and making them cower to the ground. Pyro walks to the safe and uses a controlled blast to melt the lock off. Chandler says that he has to do something about this. He grabs his sidearm and runs up to arrest Pyro. Pyro sees him out of the corner of his eye and lights Chandler on fire...

			'''To be continued...'''

	==Character Appearances==		==Character Appearances==

imported>Boycool42: /* Synopsis */

2010-04-12T11:10:10Z

Synopsis

← Older revision		Revision as of 11:10, 12 April 2010
Line 23:		Line 23:

	==Synopsis==		==Synopsis==
			Six weeks ago, [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chandler Smithson\|Chandler]] walks into the [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Chicago National Bank\|Chicago National Bank]] to open a safety deposit box.
	...


			[[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Lord Noh\|Lord Noh]] and [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyro\|his apprentice]] [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Flight\|h]][[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Telekinesis\|o]][[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Flight\|v]][[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Telekinesis\|e]][[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Flight\|r]] several yards above the bank.<br />
			The apprentice asks, ''“Father, how many more tests do I have to pass?!”''<br />
			Lord Noh says, ''“Your training is almost complete, Pyro. You have two tests left.”''<br />
			Pyro yells, ''“Two?! Haven’t I been through enough?”''<br />
			Lord Noh responds, ''“No! Don’t be ungrateful! You aren’t ready to replace me. I’m ''Lord Noh'', for Pete’s sake! You aren’t ready to lead the Congregation.”''<br />
			Pyro sighs. ''“What are the tests?”''<br />
			Lord Noh instructs him, ''“The first one is to rob this bank. Use whatever means necessary. One condition: Don’t get caught.”''<br />


			Chandler gets to the front of the line and is about to tell the clerk what he wants to do. She smiles and says, ''"Chandler is that you?"''<br />
			Chandler asks, ''"Do I know you?"''<br />
			The clerk answers, ''"It's Elizabeth Castle. We were in history together in our senior year."<br />
			Chandler says, ''"Oh, yeah, how have you been?"''<br />
			Elizabeth says, ''”Good, I just moved here. Maybe we could get coffee sometime…I’m sorry, what did you come here to do?”''


			Just as Chandler is about to says, Pyro walks through the door and yells, ''"Everybody on the ground!!!"'' He then [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Pyrokinesis\|blasts flames]] at the people in the bank, scaring them and making them cower to the ground. Pyro walks to the safe and uses a controlled blast to melt the lock off. Chandler says that he has to do something about this. He grabs his sidearm and runs up to arrest Pyro. Pyro sees him out of the corner of his eye and lights Chandler on fire...

	==Character Appearances==		==Character Appearances==

imported>Boycool42 at 20:42, 6 April 2010

2010-04-06T20:42:05Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 20:42, 6 April 2010
Line 9:		Line 9:
	\| storyby =		\| storyby =
	\| editedby =		\| editedby =
	\| last = [[User:Boycool42/~~Noh’s~~ Apprentice/Volume One\|My Life]]		\| last = [[User:Boycool42/Noh's Apprentice/Volume One/Chapter One\|My Life]]
	\| next =		\| next =
	}}		}}