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	Derek didn't even reply; he just ran. He ran down yet more alleyways with Lloyd following, but a man stepped out in front of him blocking his way past.		Derek didn't even reply; he just ran. He ran down yet more alleyways with Lloyd following, but a man stepped out in front of him blocking his way past.

	"Ah, [[User:Cockney Heroes/Characters/John Doe\|John]] it's about time," smiled Lloyd but the smile was soon wiped of his face when his partner fell to the floor unconscious.		"Ah, [[User:Cockney Heroes/Characters/John Doe\|John]] it's about time," smiled Lloyd, but the smile was soon wiped of his face when his partner fell to the floor unconscious.

	"Leave my son alone," said [[User:Cockney Heroes/Characters/Patrick Simmonds\|Patrick]] as he sent a beam of red light at Lloyd which covered him and made him convulse and spasm and fall to the floor unconscious.		"Leave my son alone," said [[User:Cockney Heroes/Characters/Patrick Simmonds\|Patrick]] as he sent [[User:Cockney Heroes/Abilities/Red Lightning\|a beam of red light]] at Lloyd which covered him and made him convulse and spasm and fall to the floor unconscious.

	"Now run Derek!" screamed Patrick. Derek didn't need telling twice as he ran away from the scene.		"Now run Derek!" screamed Patrick. Derek didn't need telling twice as he ran away from the scene.

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	“Never mind that, I understand you help people with abilities to control them,” said Derek, “am I right?”		“Never mind that, I understand you help people with abilities to control them,” said Derek, “am I right?”

	“Yes, and you are?” replied Claude, “So I assume you are calling because you need help with your ability?”		“Yes, and you are?” replied Claude. “So I assume you are calling because you need help with your ability?”

	“Yes, can you help me?" he started, but before he could finish he heard a voice he never thought he would hear.		“Yes, can you help me?" he started, but before he could finish he heard a voice he never thought he would hear.

	“Well, well, ~~well”~~, said [[User:Cockney Heroes/Characters/Lloyd Parker\|Lloyd Parker]]. “I found ~~you”~~		“Well, well, well,” said [[User:Cockney Heroes/Characters/Lloyd Parker\|Lloyd Parker]]. “I found you.”

	“Oh ~~no”~~, said Derek		“Oh no,” said Derek

	“Oh, ~~yes”~~, Lloyd grinned nastily.		“Oh, yes,” Lloyd grinned nastily.

	Derek started to run. As he ran he heard a voice and realised that his phone was still connected to Claude’s.		Derek started to run. As he ran he heard a voice and realised that his phone was still connected to Claude’s.

	“Hello?! Are you still there?!”, Claude was shouting down the phone.		“Hello?! Are you still there?!” Claude was shouting down the phone.

	~~“Yes”~~, replied Derek who was very out of breath by this point.		“Yes,” replied Derek who was very out of breath by this point.

	“Where and when do want to meet me?” asked Claude.		“Where and when do want to meet me?” asked Claude.
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	“Meet at the Tower of London then, see you there tomorrow,” said Claude.		“Meet at the Tower of London then, see you there tomorrow,” said Claude.

	“Thank you! ~~Bye”~~ Derek responded, he clicked his phone off and as he did he ran into Lloyd.		“Thank you! Bye,” Derek responded, he clicked his phone off and as he did he ran into Lloyd.

	“Going somewhere?” Lloyd didn’t look pleased; he still had burn marks on his face, which now looked quite grotesque.		“Going somewhere?” Lloyd didn’t look pleased; he still had burn marks on his face, which now looked quite grotesque.

	~~“Yes”~~ said Derek “anywhere where you aren’t!” But Derek still hadn't gained control of his ability since his last meeting with Lloyd and his partner John. He was defenseless but he noticed a metal bar and grabbed it.		“Yes,” said Derek, “anywhere where you aren’t!” But Derek still hadn't gained control of his ability since his last meeting with Lloyd and his partner John. He was defenseless but he noticed a metal bar and grabbed it.

	"What you going to do with that? Hit me?" laughed Lloyd, as Derek swung the bar at him ~~but~~ his reflexes were too good and he grabbed to bar in mid flight. Lloyd laughed as he pulled out a taser, "~~time~~ to go back to where you belong." ~~but~~ what Lloyd hadn't expected was Derek could produce small amounts of electricity and sent them down the bar and straight into Lloyd who screamed.		"What you going to do with that? Hit me?" laughed Lloyd, as Derek swung the bar at him. But his reflexes were too good and he grabbed to bar in mid-flight. Lloyd laughed as he pulled out a taser. "Time to go back to where you belong." But what Lloyd hadn't expected was Derek could produce small amounts of electricity and sent them down the bar and straight into Lloyd who screamed.

	"You can't use your ability," he rambled, "after I shot you."		"You can't use your ability," he rambled, "after I shot you."

	Derek didn't even reply he just ran. He ran down yet more alleyways with Lloyd following, but a man stepped out in front of him blocking his way past.		Derek didn't even reply; he just ran. He ran down yet more alleyways with Lloyd following, but a man stepped out in front of him blocking his way past.

	"Ah, [[User:Cockney Heroes/Characters/John Doe\|John]] ~~its~~ about time," smiled Lloyd but the smile was soon wiped of his face when his partner fell to the floor unconscious.		"Ah, [[User:Cockney Heroes/Characters/John Doe\|John]] it's about time," smiled Lloyd but the smile was soon wiped of his face when his partner fell to the floor unconscious.

	"Leave my son alone," said [[User:Cockney Heroes/Characters/Patrick Simmonds\|Patrick]] as he sent a beam of red light at Lloyd which covered him and made him convulse and spasm and fall to the floor unconscious.		"Leave my son alone," said [[User:Cockney Heroes/Characters/Patrick Simmonds\|Patrick]] as he sent a beam of red light at Lloyd which covered him and made him convulse and spasm and fall to the floor unconscious.
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	"Now run Derek!" screamed Patrick. Derek didn't need telling twice as he ran away from the scene.		"Now run Derek!" screamed Patrick. Derek didn't need telling twice as he ran away from the scene.

	"Why now? Why did he help me now? Was that really my father?" Derek's head was filled with different thoughts, his eyes started welling up as he thought of all those years without him. "He has an ability too? It looked like mine, so maybe I did get something of him."		''Why now? Why did he help me now? Was that really my father?'' Derek's head was filled with different thoughts; his eyes started welling up as he thought of all those years without him. ''He has an ability too? It looked like mine, so maybe I did get something out of him.''

	'''April 22 2009, 3 pm'''		'''April 22 2009, 3 pm'''

	“Oh no! Oh no, Oh no Oh no!”		“Oh no! Oh no, oh no oh no!”

	Derek was not pleased, he had just looked at his phone and realised he had to meet Claude in half an hour.		Derek was not pleased, he had just looked at his phone and realised he had to meet Claude in half an hour.
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	Derek had spent the night at a youth hostel as he hadn’t been able to find anywhere else to stay.		Derek had spent the night at a youth hostel as he hadn’t been able to find anywhere else to stay.

	Suddenly he saw his old teacher, [[User:Cockney Heroes/Characters/Mr. Clayton\|Mr Clayton]], across the road about to get into his car.		Suddenly he saw his old teacher, [[User:Cockney Heroes/Characters/Mr. Clayton\|Mr. Clayton]], across the road about to get into his car.

	“Sir!” he shouted, with no response, “SIR!”		“Sir!” he shouted, with no response, “SIR!”

	This time he heard and turned around to see Derek running up to him		This time he heard and turned around to see Derek running up to him.

	“Derek?!”, said Mr. Clayton incredulously , “Oh my god! We’ve been looking for you for years!”		“Derek?!” said Mr. Clayton incredulously. “Oh my god! We’ve been looking for you for years!”

	“Sir, I need you ~~help”~~, said Derek		“Sir, I need you help,” said Derek.

	“What sort of help?” asked Mr. Clayton		“What sort of help?” asked Mr. Clayton.

	“I need a lift to the [[User:Cockney Heroes/Places/The Tower of London\|Tower of London]]”, said Derek, “Please! If you do this I would be SO grateful!”		“I need a lift to the [[User:Cockney Heroes/Places/The Tower of London\|Tower of London]],” said Derek, “Please! If you do this I would be SO grateful!”

	“OK, but only because you were always my favourite ~~student”~~, Mr. Clayton replied		“OK, but only because you were always my favourite student,” Mr. Clayton replied.

	'''45 minutes later'''		'''45 minutes later'''

	“Thank you ~~Sir”~~, Derek was saying as he stepped out of the car, “Thank you so ~~much”~~		“Thank you, Sir,” Derek was saying as he stepped out of the car. “Thank you so much.”

	“It’s fine Derek, but please for me stay out of ~~trouble”~~, said Mr. Clayton		“It’s fine Derek, but please, for me, stay out of trouble,” said Mr. Clayton.

	Derek got out of the car and started to walk. After 15 minutes he heard people talking.		Derek got out of the car and started to walk. After 15 minutes he heard people talking.