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2010-04-10T22:49:20Z

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	He looked up, "Well..".		He looked up, "Well..".

	~~‘Look’~~ Connor sharply interrupted him.		"Look" Connor sharply interrupted him.

	Ahead a young man was beating beaten up by two elder men in suits. Bent over choking the air, the men pounded him with a series of vicious blows; his bruises shone as the sunlight permeated the daunting alleyway. "Think you were gonna get away with not paying, did ya?" The [[User:Leckie/Visions of Earth/Alves\|taller man]] stood over the beaten man and took out a pistol, without warning he suddenly brought his hand plunging down, using the pistol as a club. It smashed into the man’s shoulder and his pained expression was sorrowfully visible to the four teenagers.		Ahead a young man was beating beaten up by two elder men in suits. Bent over choking the air, the men pounded him with a series of vicious blows; his bruises shone as the sunlight permeated the daunting alleyway. "Think you were gonna get away with not paying, did ya?" The [[User:Leckie/Visions of Earth/Alves\|taller man]] stood over the beaten man and took out a pistol, without warning he suddenly brought his hand plunging down, using the pistol as a club. It smashed into the man’s shoulder and his pained expression was sorrowfully visible to the four teenagers.

	Minerva stepped forward and coughed, the two men looked up apprehensiously but smirked as four youths blocked the entrance of the alley. ~~‘Get~~ back to ~~school’~~ the shorter man muttered.		Minerva stepped forward and coughed, the two men looked up apprehensiously but smirked as four youths blocked the entrance of the alley. "Get back to school", the shorter man muttered.

	Speaking much more confidently than she was feeling, Minerva took another step towards them, ~~‘leave~~ that man, ~~alone’~~. Alves, the taller man was a physical specimen, and proficient in many a firearm, he raised his gun and fired at the unwelcome guests. Reacting instinctively Minerva raised her arms, and [[User:Leckie/Visions of Earth/Terrakinesis\|the earth between the groups rose to form a shield]], protecting herself and the others. Shocked and bewildered Alves swore, and jumping over the metal fence, he and his smaller associate escaped.		Speaking much more confidently than she was feeling, Minerva took another step towards them, "leave that man, alone". Alves, the taller man was a physical specimen, and proficient in many a firearm, he raised his gun and fired at the unwelcome guests. Reacting instinctively Minerva raised her arms, and [[User:Leckie/Visions of Earth/Terrakinesis\|the earth between the groups rose to form a shield]], protecting herself and the others. Shocked and bewildered Alves swore, and jumping over the metal fence, he and his smaller associate escaped.
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	Elsewhere Ed was after revenge, he knew the man that had killed [[User:Leckie/Visions of Earth/Ed's mother\|his mother]] had some sort of powers, and apparently [[User:Leckie/Visions of Earth/Magnetism\|so did he]]. He perfunctory flicked through pages over the Internet, until he came to a inconspicuous web site, ran by a guy called [[User:Leckie/Visions of Earth/Damien\|Damien]], ‘Do you have an unexplained power which allows you to do impossible things? Do you know someone with a mysterious secret, visit me to discover the phenomenon…’. Ed noted the address and went to the door, resolute and purposeful.		Elsewhere Ed was after revenge, he knew the man that had killed [[User:Leckie/Visions of Earth/Ed's mother\|his mother]] had some sort of powers, and apparently [[User:Leckie/Visions of Earth/Magnetism\|so did he]]. He perfunctory flicked through pages over the Internet, until he came to a inconspicuous web site, ran by a guy called [[User:Leckie/Visions of Earth/Damien\|Damien]], ‘Do you have an unexplained power which allows you to do impossible things? Do you know someone with a mysterious secret, visit me to discover the phenomenon…’. Ed noted the address and went to the door, resolute and purposeful.

imported>Leckie: /* Character Appearances */

2010-04-10T11:36:36Z

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	* [[User:Leckie/Visions of Earth/Jake Leckie\|Jake Leckie]]		* [[User:Leckie/Visions of Earth/Jake Leckie\|Jake Leckie]]
	* '''[[[[User:Leckie/Visions of Earth/Jon Spiro\|Jon Spiro]]'''		* '''[[User:Leckie/Visions of Earth/Jon Spiro\|Jon Spiro]]'''
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imported>Leckie: releasing episode!

2010-04-10T11:35:49Z

releasing episode!

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imported>Leckie at 20:32, 7 April 2010

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imported>Leckie: Danko wrote it

2010-04-06T18:43:43Z

Danko wrote it

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imported>Leckie: Initial Build

2010-04-05T17:42:19Z

Initial Build

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| next = [[User:Leckie/Visions of Earth/Episode:Hunted|Hunted]]
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'''TO BE CONTINUED'''

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