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	I made a page of me from the exposed future, i think you should do one as well for Volume 2 also if you read it that would be great. and a last thing Im making a new character Who is a love intrest for me and is that okay ? [[User:Gabriel Bishop\|Gabriel Bishop]] 14:43, 26 March 2009 (EDT)		I made a page of me from the exposed future, i think you should do one as well for Volume 2 also if you read it that would be great. and a last thing Im making a new character Who is a love intrest for me and is that okay ? [[User:Gabriel Bishop\|Gabriel Bishop]] 14:43, 26 March 2009 (EDT)


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== Hey ==
Hi when can you help with the [[User:Gabriel Bishop/Cockney Heroes|Cockney Heroes]] page ? [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 13:13, 16 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop

Hey could you help me on the [[User:Gabriel Bishop/Cockney Heroes|Cockney Heroes]] page ? [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 12:32, 17 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop

Ok first of all we have to create the characters apart from Claude and Gabriel Bishop and maybe u ? [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 12:43, 17 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop

Can you go on Msn so we can discuss the volume ? :) [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 17:11, 17 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop

== Cockney Heroes - Start ==

Ok characters. I think we need at least to more + some run ons. (put the power you want in after your name.) I think that me and you should be the English rebel (we could call ourselves revolt or another word that means the same). Our first task is to save [[Claude]] (mabye [[Abigail]] in a later novel). In this novel we should just have the background info explaining our powers. If I were you I'd stick to one power otherwise it gets a bit confusing. If you see [[User:Biohazard|Biohazard]] you'll see what I mean. If you want we could make one up and create a user page for it. Later on we can create AT tracker assignments and such, as well as character pages.

*Claude ~ [[Invisibility]]
*Abigail ~ [[Forcefield projection]]
*Gabirel Bishop ~ Intuitive Aptitude
*Irony ~ Ability Diminishment

Hope I helped. --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 12:52, 17 March 2009 (EDT)

Ok is it okay if i can have Intuitive Aptitude But use 1 ability at a time. ?
* I think that should be O.k but if you have IA you would be more likely to kill the evolved humans than save them, I would probabaly change it. --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 13:02, 17 March 2009 (EDT)

* I can just make a new ability which allows me to control the Hunger and btw do you have msn becuase that will make it easier to talk :) [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 13:05, 17 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop
** I will give soon, got to do homework soon, I created a category for Cockney Heroes. I have added the main page. Got to do homework, be back soon. :) Btw think of a name for the new ability, mabye you could take the powers in the same way but obtained an ability to bring people back to life so take their abilities and then bring them back to life or something. Also think of some ideas for my ability :) --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 13:10, 17 March 2009 (EDT)
* MSN is yatta@live.co.uk (another heroes reference) --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 13:11, 17 March 2009 (EDT)
** Thanks,will speak soon Yours Sincearlly [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 13:13, 17 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop
* Any ideas for mine or yours? --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 16:29, 17 March 2009 (EDT)
** Well i personally wanted to keep mine but i came up with the idea for you .I thought the opposite to ando's supercharging ability to power down abilities but not fully like the haitian's but makes the abilities weaker ? [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 16:33, 17 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop
*** I really like the one you gave me ~ we should call it Abilit diminisment.Why don't we change your power to [[Aura absorption]] but you have controlled it to a controlled state where you don't kill the person? --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 16:49, 17 March 2009 (EDT)
**** I still wanna keep Intuitive Aptitude.Im gonna get started on page
*** Sure

== Pages ==
Hi have you seen Cockney Heroes and Ur ability page ? [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 14:54, 20 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop

Done like it now.All we need is image ;) [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 15:16, 20 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop

== My Page ==

No, where are they :). Also I have commented on Witchy2006's talk page, I think he is being really unfair. I would try not to rise to it though as it makes you seem as bad as him (you're not though). --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 14:58, 20 March 2009 (EDT)

Ok thanks for the witchy2006 thing,he does make me upset sometimes but i wont say anything. and if u check recent changes you will find my page and cockney heroes :) [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 15:00, 20 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop

* Great, it's ok bout the witchy thing. I moved ability diminishment to your username page, it is simpler if all the cockney heroes pages are in your username space. P.S instead of making it a fan power, make it look like a normal power and add it to the fan power section.

** Added one, I basically inverted the colours on the aura absorbtion page. g2g for now --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 15:20, 20 March 2009 (EDT)
*** I created by Cockney heroes page here [[User:Gabriel Bishop/Irony]], you will need to do one for you, claude, abigail and some others. O.K. --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 15:56, 20 March 2009 (EDT)
** I added the ability diminishment page, we should also create the first episode, if you write it I'll add and we can make a final version. The first version should be about out first person to save, and later we can have a flashback episode about how we met per say. --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 16:07, 20 March 2009 (EDT)
*** Great,btw we need a volume name and I was thinking i could dissapear in Finale .Thats what happens to me the government take me to flat 52 in kirby plaza where my chracter mna saves me :) [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 16:12, 20 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop
**** Great sounds good, but we need to see how the volume pans out. The volume could be called '''Persued''' or '''stalked''' --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 16:17, 20 March 2009 (EDT)
***** i was gonna say '''Hidden''' or '''Wanted''' or my favourite '''In The Shadows''' [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 16:21, 20 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop
**** Definately in the shadows, it's great. If you start the first episode of Volume 1 I'll fix it up later. O.K See you --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 16:24, 20 March 2009 (EDT)
***** kk i'll start ep 2moz and write some diffrernt stuff :) [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 16:28, 20 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop
**** I'm going out but if you write the first episode now, in about 3/4 hours I can fix it up :) --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 07:04, 21 March 2009 (EDT)
Sure

== 1.01 Hidden in the Darkness ==

Firstly, brilliant job, I would never have thought of that. Just a few points I want to discuss before I change it:
# '''Powers and People''' ~ We need to have our own seperate page for powers and for people. For example we need to have User:Gabriel Bishop/Abigail and User:Gabriel Bishop/Pyrokinesis. You can make them or I can depending on what you want. But remember we need to have it for everyone in the story and every power.
# '''Writing Technique''' ~ I can see why you want to add as many people in as possible, I would as well, but because it is this short, cut out Abigail, Claude and Lee. Just have this one focus on us training Derek Simmond, this will make it more conscise. Have the company agent come into our training facility, so to speak.
# '''Conflicting Timeline''' ~ if it is a company agent it must be happening before the company collapse + Danko. Therefore this should be in the Volume 3 timeline, and the next volume in the volume 4 timeline, so we become rebel in the next volume.
# '''Ability Diminshment''' ~ I think that we should make the power so that when I drain an ability I can use it while draining or I am very weak, what do you think about this? (Do you like the page by the way).
# '''Stuff we need to do way later''' after this volume we should create pages like AT trackers, but this is much later on.
# '''Overall Length''' When I go over it I will probably make it a bit longer as it is quite short.
# '''Actual Cockney Heroes Page''' We should make this just an intro page, and make a seperate page for each Volume.
# '''Namespace''' I'm not sure if we're allowed to do this but we should consider moving it to the '''User:Cockney Heroes''' namespace. I might ask Ryan if we're allowed later.
Anyway, that's about it. I now this sounds really, really negative, but this is the first episode, we need to make this is right before we do anything else. Let me just say: Brilliant Episode, can't wait for the next one, Can't wait for Elle episode and love the Jack the Ripper episode title. Really good job :) --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 15:25, 21 March 2009 (EDT)
* Thanks,first of all I wanted to get rid of abigail and lee but keep Claude,secondally the actuall storyline is set as the recruit and will continue to volume 4 and finally i'll do assigment trackers i did mine ages ago,we should still keeep proper power pages and volume 2 is about finding Gabriel Bishop :) [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 16:16, 21 March 2009 (EDT)
** The timeline makes sense now, so Volumer one is in Villans, as volume 2 should be. And then volume 3 or our story should tie in with volume four of heroes. What do you think about me accessing powers when draining them? To make it fair, we should have all the stories on your page with characters and then (so as not to clog up your namespace) the powers + AT trackers on my namespace. When you get rid of Abigail and Lee I will go over it. (Also should we try and keep the company agent prisoner for information about the company). When I go over it I will also add tex tot pad it out a bit. Also, what do you think about splitting the volume pages? --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 08:01, 22 March 2009 (EDT)
*** I was thinking that Season 1 would be Volume 1 2 and 3 and that it would be set around Powerless to A Clear And present Danger :) [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 11:40, 22 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop
** Makes sense :) What do you think about me accessing powers when draining them? Do you want to mve the powers + AT trackers to my namespace so as not to clog up yours? Oh, and when you get rid of Lee + Abigail I will fix it up and add some more. --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 11:53, 22 March 2009 (EDT)
*** How about you make The powers you come up with and your At's in your namespace and the same for me ;) also Abigail And Lee will only be in Elle [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 12:02, 22 March 2009 (EDT)
** What do you think about ability diminshiment? I think that it would be better if I could use the power while draining it --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 15:13, 22 March 2009 (EDT)
*** Totally, Maybe when you completely get control over it you can copy it :) [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 15:27, 22 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop
**** I think thats a volume 2 thing, so that we can have an explanation on how to save you --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 15:41, 22 March 2009 (EDT)
***** Exactly but im not in volume 2 becuase you lot have to save me its a chance for you to write a volume then we both write volume 3 which would be about 21 eps long :) [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 15:46, 22 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop
****** What page? --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 15:22, 23 March 2009 (EDT)
******* This page what i said aboive u didnt reply [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 15:24, 23 March 2009 (EDT)
****** Sorry, I'm confused, could you give me a link?--{{User:Irony/Signature}} 15:26, 23 March 2009 (EDT)
******* I meant where i said Exactly but im not in volume 2 becuase you lot have to save me its a chance for you to write a volume then we both write volume 3 which would be about 21 eps long [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 15:29, 23 March 2009 (EDT)
****** Oh, sorry. Yeah thats right. It should be about that. Shall I tidy up Episode 1.1.01 (1.1.01 stands for Season, Volume and Episode) not, or lengthen it a bit --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 15:31, 23 March 2009 (EDT)
******* Sure [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 15:35, 23 March 2009 (EDT)
****** O.K, do you mind if I remove the bit about the tower of london, I don't really understand how it fits in with the story--{{User:Irony/Signature}} 15:36, 23 March 2009 (EDT)
******* Not really that just visit it but get attacked [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 15:41, 23 March 2009 (EDT)
******** Can we make it the place where we meet Derek Simmons, and we go to a junk yard to work on his power, and that is where we get attacked? --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 15:45, 23 March 2009 (EDT)
********* Hmmm secret base like i dunno copy hiro lol
******** Not secret base, just a place we can go without the public seeing--{{User:Irony/Signature}} 15:55, 23 March 2009 (EDT)
********** How about like a abandoned building
******** I like it :) --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 16:00, 23 March 2009 (EDT)
****** It is done [[User:Gabriel Bishop/Cockney Heroes - Season One|here]], what do you think of it? It is basically the same --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 16:47, 23 March 2009 (EDT)
******* Its great remember i used to work for the company ;) [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 16:56, 23 March 2009 (EDT)

==New?==
Are we gonna start making ep 2 yet [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 15:16, 24 March 2009 (EDT)
* Sure, I got to go, but I'll be on at 8 O'clock (England time) --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 15:18, 24 March 2009 (EDT)
** Sure and i gonna ask nivekj13 if he wants to be in cockney heroes volume 2 ? [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 15:21, 24 March 2009 (EDT)
*** Sure (make sure he chooses a good power though, make sure it is not a multi-power ability) --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 15:22, 24 March 2009 (EDT)

== my brother ==

[[User:IceGhost78|IceGhost78]] i am not sure if you meant to put that signature there but i removed in case you didnt sorry if you meant to

Where? Sorry? --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 15:44, 24 March 2009 (EDT)

[[User:IceGhost78|IceGhost78]] [[irony]] page

[[User:IceGhost78|IceGhost78]] No Problem brother

==Light absorption==
Hey Irony. I moved light absorption to your user namespace, because as far as I know, it isn't a power used on the show or in [[Heroes Evolutions]] as of yet. -- {{User:Tristan0709/Signature}} 03:14, 26 March 2009 (EDT)
* *facepalm* I am ''so'' sorry! I really need to read the iStories. I swear that ability has been made many times before, and moved every time, so I thought someone was doing it again. Again, sorry! -- {{User:Tristan0709/Signature}} 03:43, 26 March 2009 (EDT)
**Really? Thanks! I'm fairly sure inferior it spelt right. Wait, no, spelled.....argh, I have no idea. Anyhow, I just try to do what seems to be the proper thing, occasionally screwing up, like right now! It's kinda hard having not seen any of the episodes to tell when stuff is right or wrong, but whoever writes the synopses deserves my gratitude for fixing that :). Took me a few days to adjust to patroller-dom, I'm sure you'll get better as time goes on! -- {{User:Tristan0709/Signature}} 03:52, 26 March 2009 (EDT)

== New Page ==
I made a page of me from the exposed future, i think you should do one as well for Volume 2 also if you read it that would be great. and a last thing Im making a new character Who is a love intrest for me and is that okay ? [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 14:43, 26 March 2009 (EDT)

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