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imported>Mohinder613 at 04:22, 11 March 2009

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imported>Mohinder613 at 04:22, 11 March 2009

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	** Well, good work. I would support this becoming a main article. -- [[User:LightSpectra\|LightSpectra]] 09:54, 13 January 2008 (EST)		** Well, good work. I would support this becoming a main article. -- [[User:LightSpectra\|LightSpectra]] 09:54, 13 January 2008 (EST)
	*** Well thanks. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 00:09, 19 January 2008 (EST)		*** Well thanks. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 00:09, 19 January 2008 (EST)
	****I think it should become an article too! ~~(However, should it become a theory article, since most of it is speculation?)~~ I thoroughly enjoyed reading the article; it shed some light on a subject that, I have to admit, am not greatly familiar with. --[[User:Mohinder613\|Mohinder613]] <span style="color:green;">(my</span> [[User talk:Mohinder613\|talk]]<span style="color:green;"> page)</span> 00:21, 11 March 2009 (EDT)		****I think it should become an article too! I thoroughly enjoyed reading the article; it shed some light on a subject that, I have to admit, am not greatly familiar with. --[[User:Mohinder613\|Mohinder613]] <span style="color:green;">(my</span> [[User talk:Mohinder613\|talk]]<span style="color:green;"> page)</span> 00:21, 11 March 2009 (EDT)

imported>Mohinder613 at 04:21, 11 March 2009

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	** Well, good work. I would support this becoming a main article. -- [[User:LightSpectra\|LightSpectra]] 09:54, 13 January 2008 (EST)		** Well, good work. I would support this becoming a main article. -- [[User:LightSpectra\|LightSpectra]] 09:54, 13 January 2008 (EST)
	*** Well thanks. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 00:09, 19 January 2008 (EST)		*** Well thanks. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 00:09, 19 January 2008 (EST)
			****I think it should become an article too! (However, should it become a theory article, since most of it is speculation?) I thoroughly enjoyed reading the article; it shed some light on a subject that, I have to admit, am not greatly familiar with. --[[User:Mohinder613\|Mohinder613]] <span style="color:green;">(my</span> [[User talk:Mohinder613\|talk]]<span style="color:green;"> page)</span> 00:21, 11 March 2009 (EDT)

imported>Random guy: /* Fan Creation? */

2008-01-19T05:09:59Z

Fan Creation?

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	*As of right now, It is mostly just me trying to take the information given, and trying to relate it. I have asked if it should go into the real pages or not, and no one has ever responded, so I mostly gave up on pushing the issue, and left it a fan creation. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 02:21, 13 January 2008 (EST)		*As of right now, It is mostly just me trying to take the information given, and trying to relate it. I have asked if it should go into the real pages or not, and no one has ever responded, so I mostly gave up on pushing the issue, and left it a fan creation. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 02:21, 13 January 2008 (EST)
	** Well, good work. I would support this becoming a main article. -- [[User:LightSpectra\|LightSpectra]] 09:54, 13 January 2008 (EST)		** Well, good work. I would support this becoming a main article. -- [[User:LightSpectra\|LightSpectra]] 09:54, 13 January 2008 (EST)
			*** Well thanks. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 00:09, 19 January 2008 (EST)

imported>LightSpectra at 14:54, 13 January 2008

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	The top of the article labels it a fan parallel, yet the first line says that the creators confirmed that this is one of their influences. What? -- [[User:LightSpectra\|LightSpectra]] 19:19, 3 January 2008 (EST)		The top of the article labels it a fan parallel, yet the first line says that the creators confirmed that this is one of their influences. What? -- [[User:LightSpectra\|LightSpectra]] 19:19, 3 January 2008 (EST)
	*As of right now, It is mostly just me trying to take the information given, and trying to relate it. I have asked if it should go into the real pages or not, and no one has ever responded, so I mostly gave up on pushing the issue, and left it a fan creation. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 02:21, 13 January 2008 (EST)		*As of right now, It is mostly just me trying to take the information given, and trying to relate it. I have asked if it should go into the real pages or not, and no one has ever responded, so I mostly gave up on pushing the issue, and left it a fan creation. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 02:21, 13 January 2008 (EST)
			** Well, good work. I would support this becoming a main article. -- [[User:LightSpectra\|LightSpectra]] 09:54, 13 January 2008 (EST)

imported>Random guy: /* Fan Creation? */

2008-01-13T07:21:13Z

Fan Creation?

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	The top of the article labels it a fan parallel, yet the first line says that the creators confirmed that this is one of their influences. What? -- [[User:LightSpectra\|LightSpectra]] 19:19, 3 January 2008 (EST)		The top of the article labels it a fan parallel, yet the first line says that the creators confirmed that this is one of their influences. What? -- [[User:LightSpectra\|LightSpectra]] 19:19, 3 January 2008 (EST)
			*As of right now, It is mostly just me trying to take the information given, and trying to relate it. I have asked if it should go into the real pages or not, and no one has ever responded, so I mostly gave up on pushing the issue, and left it a fan creation. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 02:21, 13 January 2008 (EST)

imported>LightSpectra at 00:19, 4 January 2008

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	Well I have completed it. Y'all can keep making it better, but as far as I am concerned, it seems finished to me. Any other things you would want me to add first? [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 20:13, 12 November 2007 (EST)		Well I have completed it. Y'all can keep making it better, but as far as I am concerned, it seems finished to me. Any other things you would want me to add first? [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 20:13, 12 November 2007 (EST)


			== Fan Creation? ==

			The top of the article labels it a fan parallel, yet the first line says that the creators confirmed that this is one of their influences. What? -- [[User:LightSpectra\|LightSpectra]] 19:19, 3 January 2008 (EST)

imported>Random guy: New section: Ready to move?

2007-11-13T01:13:27Z

New section: Ready to move?

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	** That was actually my goal in creating this page. :) [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 14:12, 11 November 2007 (EST)		** That was actually my goal in creating this page. :) [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 14:12, 11 November 2007 (EST)
	*** By the way, I have a pretty good feeling that Angela's power will be portrayed tomorrow, so I just wrote it as if it will be so. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 14:15, 11 November 2007 (EST)		*** By the way, I have a pretty good feeling that Angela's power will be portrayed tomorrow, so I just wrote it as if it will be so. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 14:15, 11 November 2007 (EST)

			== Ready to move? ==

			Well I have completed it. Y'all can keep making it better, but as far as I am concerned, it seems finished to me. Any other things you would want me to add first? [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 20:13, 12 November 2007 (EST)

imported>Random guy: /* So what do you guys think? */

2007-11-11T19:16:03Z

So what do you guys think?

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	I am very new, and do not know much about formatting, and all that html (i think it is html right?) so I want to hear feedback from people? I can take criticism, I promise. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 03:54, 11 November 2007 (EST)		I am very new, and do not know much about formatting, and all that html (i think it is html right?) so I want to hear feedback from people? I can take criticism, I promise. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 03:54, 11 November 2007 (EST)
	*For your first article, it looks very nice! I haven't read through the whole thing, and I certainly haven't checked grammar and spelling with a fine-toothed comb, but it looks like you've organized the article very nicely. At first glance, here are a few quick suggestions: You might want to add some links, like to [[Joe Pokaski]] and [[Aron Coleite]], to the CBR interview, to some of the powers, etc. You might also want to give some references to your claims--Rather than saying "Charles might have an ability that relates to this discipline as well if his ability is prophetic dreaming," tell a bit more of what we actually saw in the episode, and then use a [[help:cites\|parenthetical site]] to support your theory. Don't capitalize "e.g." Your "Miscellaneous" section should should probably have an extra set of equal signs on either side of the heading. I don't know very much about The Nine Men. You gave some good background information, but you might want to elaborate a bit more; external links, especially to [[Wikipedia:Wikipedia\|Wikipedia]], are a good idea. You can also add a lead description--I would take off the heading for the first section, make '''''The Nine Unknown Men''''' bold (since it's the name of the article) and italicized (since it's the name of a book). Don't forget to italicize ''[[Heroes]]''..... Generally looks very nice, though--well done! -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 03:46, 11 November 2007 (EST)		*For your first article, it looks very nice! I haven't read through the whole thing, and I certainly haven't checked grammar and spelling with a fine-toothed comb, but it looks like you've organized the article very nicely. At first glance, here are a few quick suggestions: You might want to add some links, like to [[Joe Pokaski]] and [[Aron Coleite]], to the CBR interview, to some of the powers, etc. You might also want to give some references to your claims--Rather than saying "Charles might have an ability that relates to this discipline as well if his ability is prophetic dreaming," tell a bit more of what we actually saw in the episode, and then use a [[help:cites\|parenthetical site]] to support your theory. Don't capitalize "e.g." Your "Miscellaneous" section should should probably have an extra set of equal signs on either side of the heading. I don't know very much about The Nine Men. You gave some good background information, but you might want to elaborate a bit more; external links, especially to [[Wikipedia:Wikipedia\|Wikipedia]], are a good idea. You can also add a lead description--I would take off the heading for the first section, make '''''The Nine Unknown Men''''' bold (since it's the name of the article) and italicized (since it's the name of a book). Don't forget to italicize ''[[Heroes]]''..... Generally looks very nice, though--well done! -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 03:46, 11 November 2007 (EST)
	**Okay so I added links to a lot of things and made the headings look better. I will definately add some more material about the 9UM, I still need to add some citation stuff, and I am uncertain which episode have the info about Charles, I thought one was Landslide, but I might be wrong. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 05:20, 11 November 2007 (EST)		**Okay so I added links to a lot of things and made the headings look better. I will definately add some more material about the 9UM, I still need to add some citation stuff, and I am uncertain which episode have the info about Charles, I thought one was Landslide, but I might be wrong. Thank you so much Ryan for all your help. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 05:20, 11 November 2007 (EST)
	***If you check the article we have for [[Charles]], you can see which episodes he was appeared or was referenced--namely, ''[[Genesis]]'', ''[[One Giant Leap]]'', ''[[Nothing to Hide]]'', ''[[How to Stop an Exploding Man]]'', and ''[[Four Months Later]]''. -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 05:24, 11 November 2007 (EST)		***If you check the article we have for [[Charles]], you can see which episodes he was appeared or was referenced--namely, ''[[Genesis]]'', ''[[One Giant Leap]]'', ''[[Nothing to Hide]]'', ''[[How to Stop an Exploding Man]]'', and ''[[Four Months Later]]''. -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 05:24, 11 November 2007 (EST)
	* I really like this one. I think it could easily be moved to a subpage of [[Theory:9\|9]] and out of user space once you are finished linking it up and such. It's still a theory article, of course, but it's a very well developed one.--[[User:Hardvice\|Hardvice]] <small>[[User talk:Hardvice\|(talk)]]</small> 05:57, 11 November 2007 (EST)		* I really like this one. I think it could easily be moved to a subpage of [[Theory:9\|9]] and out of user space once you are finished linking it up and such. It's still a theory article, of course, but it's a very well developed one.--[[User:Hardvice\|Hardvice]] <small>[[User talk:Hardvice\|(talk)]]</small> 05:57, 11 November 2007 (EST)

imported>Random guy: /* So what do you guys think? */

2007-11-11T19:15:26Z

So what do you guys think?

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	* I really like this one. I think it could easily be moved to a subpage of [[Theory:9\|9]] and out of user space once you are finished linking it up and such. It's still a theory article, of course, but it's a very well developed one.--[[User:Hardvice\|Hardvice]] <small>[[User talk:Hardvice\|(talk)]]</small> 05:57, 11 November 2007 (EST)		* I really like this one. I think it could easily be moved to a subpage of [[Theory:9\|9]] and out of user space once you are finished linking it up and such. It's still a theory article, of course, but it's a very well developed one.--[[User:Hardvice\|Hardvice]] <small>[[User talk:Hardvice\|(talk)]]</small> 05:57, 11 November 2007 (EST)
	** That was actually my goal in creating this page. :) [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 14:12, 11 November 2007 (EST)		** That was actually my goal in creating this page. :) [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 14:12, 11 November 2007 (EST)
			*** By the way, I have a pretty good feeling that Angela's power will be portrayed tomorrow, so I just wrote it as if it will be so. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 14:15, 11 November 2007 (EST)

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	** Well, good work. I would support this becoming a main article. -- [[User:LightSpectra\|LightSpectra]] 09:54, 13 January 2008 (EST)		** Well, good work. I would support this becoming a main article. -- [[User:LightSpectra\|LightSpectra]] 09:54, 13 January 2008 (EST)
	*** Well thanks. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 00:09, 19 January 2008 (EST)		*** Well thanks. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 00:09, 19 January 2008 (EST)
	****I think it should become an article too! ~~(However, should it become a theory article, since most of it is speculation?)~~ I thoroughly enjoyed reading the article; it shed some light on a subject that, I have to admit, am not greatly familiar with. --[[User:Mohinder613\|Mohinder613]] <span style="color:green;">(my</span> [[User talk:Mohinder613\|talk]]<span style="color:green;"> page)</span> 00:21, 11 March 2009 (EDT)		****I think it should become an article too! I thoroughly enjoyed reading the article; it shed some light on a subject that, I have to admit, am not greatly familiar with. --[[User:Mohinder613\|Mohinder613]] <span style="color:green;">(my</span> [[User talk:Mohinder613\|talk]]<span style="color:green;"> page)</span> 00:21, 11 March 2009 (EDT)

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	** Well, good work. I would support this becoming a main article. -- [[User:LightSpectra\|LightSpectra]] 09:54, 13 January 2008 (EST)		** Well, good work. I would support this becoming a main article. -- [[User:LightSpectra\|LightSpectra]] 09:54, 13 January 2008 (EST)
	*** Well thanks. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 00:09, 19 January 2008 (EST)		*** Well thanks. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 00:09, 19 January 2008 (EST)
			****I think it should become an article too! (However, should it become a theory article, since most of it is speculation?) I thoroughly enjoyed reading the article; it shed some light on a subject that, I have to admit, am not greatly familiar with. --[[User:Mohinder613\|Mohinder613]] <span style="color:green;">(my</span> [[User talk:Mohinder613\|talk]]<span style="color:green;"> page)</span> 00:21, 11 March 2009 (EDT)

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	*As of right now, It is mostly just me trying to take the information given, and trying to relate it. I have asked if it should go into the real pages or not, and no one has ever responded, so I mostly gave up on pushing the issue, and left it a fan creation. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 02:21, 13 January 2008 (EST)		*As of right now, It is mostly just me trying to take the information given, and trying to relate it. I have asked if it should go into the real pages or not, and no one has ever responded, so I mostly gave up on pushing the issue, and left it a fan creation. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 02:21, 13 January 2008 (EST)
	** Well, good work. I would support this becoming a main article. -- [[User:LightSpectra\|LightSpectra]] 09:54, 13 January 2008 (EST)		** Well, good work. I would support this becoming a main article. -- [[User:LightSpectra\|LightSpectra]] 09:54, 13 January 2008 (EST)
			*** Well thanks. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 00:09, 19 January 2008 (EST)

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	The top of the article labels it a fan parallel, yet the first line says that the creators confirmed that this is one of their influences. What? -- [[User:LightSpectra\|LightSpectra]] 19:19, 3 January 2008 (EST)		The top of the article labels it a fan parallel, yet the first line says that the creators confirmed that this is one of their influences. What? -- [[User:LightSpectra\|LightSpectra]] 19:19, 3 January 2008 (EST)
	*As of right now, It is mostly just me trying to take the information given, and trying to relate it. I have asked if it should go into the real pages or not, and no one has ever responded, so I mostly gave up on pushing the issue, and left it a fan creation. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 02:21, 13 January 2008 (EST)		*As of right now, It is mostly just me trying to take the information given, and trying to relate it. I have asked if it should go into the real pages or not, and no one has ever responded, so I mostly gave up on pushing the issue, and left it a fan creation. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 02:21, 13 January 2008 (EST)
			** Well, good work. I would support this becoming a main article. -- [[User:LightSpectra\|LightSpectra]] 09:54, 13 January 2008 (EST)

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	I am very new, and do not know much about formatting, and all that html (i think it is html right?) so I want to hear feedback from people? I can take criticism, I promise. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 03:54, 11 November 2007 (EST)		I am very new, and do not know much about formatting, and all that html (i think it is html right?) so I want to hear feedback from people? I can take criticism, I promise. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 03:54, 11 November 2007 (EST)
	*For your first article, it looks very nice! I haven't read through the whole thing, and I certainly haven't checked grammar and spelling with a fine-toothed comb, but it looks like you've organized the article very nicely. At first glance, here are a few quick suggestions: You might want to add some links, like to [[Joe Pokaski]] and [[Aron Coleite]], to the CBR interview, to some of the powers, etc. You might also want to give some references to your claims--Rather than saying "Charles might have an ability that relates to this discipline as well if his ability is prophetic dreaming," tell a bit more of what we actually saw in the episode, and then use a [[help:cites\|parenthetical site]] to support your theory. Don't capitalize "e.g." Your "Miscellaneous" section should should probably have an extra set of equal signs on either side of the heading. I don't know very much about The Nine Men. You gave some good background information, but you might want to elaborate a bit more; external links, especially to [[Wikipedia:Wikipedia\|Wikipedia]], are a good idea. You can also add a lead description--I would take off the heading for the first section, make '''''The Nine Unknown Men''''' bold (since it's the name of the article) and italicized (since it's the name of a book). Don't forget to italicize ''[[Heroes]]''..... Generally looks very nice, though--well done! -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 03:46, 11 November 2007 (EST)		*For your first article, it looks very nice! I haven't read through the whole thing, and I certainly haven't checked grammar and spelling with a fine-toothed comb, but it looks like you've organized the article very nicely. At first glance, here are a few quick suggestions: You might want to add some links, like to [[Joe Pokaski]] and [[Aron Coleite]], to the CBR interview, to some of the powers, etc. You might also want to give some references to your claims--Rather than saying "Charles might have an ability that relates to this discipline as well if his ability is prophetic dreaming," tell a bit more of what we actually saw in the episode, and then use a [[help:cites\|parenthetical site]] to support your theory. Don't capitalize "e.g." Your "Miscellaneous" section should should probably have an extra set of equal signs on either side of the heading. I don't know very much about The Nine Men. You gave some good background information, but you might want to elaborate a bit more; external links, especially to [[Wikipedia:Wikipedia\|Wikipedia]], are a good idea. You can also add a lead description--I would take off the heading for the first section, make '''''The Nine Unknown Men''''' bold (since it's the name of the article) and italicized (since it's the name of a book). Don't forget to italicize ''[[Heroes]]''..... Generally looks very nice, though--well done! -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 03:46, 11 November 2007 (EST)
	**Okay so I added links to a lot of things and made the headings look better. I will definately add some more material about the 9UM, I still need to add some citation stuff, and I am uncertain which episode have the info about Charles, I thought one was Landslide, but I might be wrong. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 05:20, 11 November 2007 (EST)		**Okay so I added links to a lot of things and made the headings look better. I will definately add some more material about the 9UM, I still need to add some citation stuff, and I am uncertain which episode have the info about Charles, I thought one was Landslide, but I might be wrong. Thank you so much Ryan for all your help. [[User:Random guy\|Random guy]] 05:20, 11 November 2007 (EST)
	***If you check the article we have for [[Charles]], you can see which episodes he was appeared or was referenced--namely, ''[[Genesis]]'', ''[[One Giant Leap]]'', ''[[Nothing to Hide]]'', ''[[How to Stop an Exploding Man]]'', and ''[[Four Months Later]]''. -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 05:24, 11 November 2007 (EST)		***If you check the article we have for [[Charles]], you can see which episodes he was appeared or was referenced--namely, ''[[Genesis]]'', ''[[One Giant Leap]]'', ''[[Nothing to Hide]]'', ''[[How to Stop an Exploding Man]]'', and ''[[Four Months Later]]''. -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 05:24, 11 November 2007 (EST)
	* I really like this one. I think it could easily be moved to a subpage of [[Theory:9\|9]] and out of user space once you are finished linking it up and such. It's still a theory article, of course, but it's a very well developed one.--[[User:Hardvice\|Hardvice]] <small>[[User talk:Hardvice\|(talk)]]</small> 05:57, 11 November 2007 (EST)		* I really like this one. I think it could easily be moved to a subpage of [[Theory:9\|9]] and out of user space once you are finished linking it up and such. It's still a theory article, of course, but it's a very well developed one.--[[User:Hardvice\|Hardvice]] <small>[[User talk:Hardvice\|(talk)]]</small> 05:57, 11 November 2007 (EST)