User talk:Thunder77 - Revision history

imported>Ryangibsonstewart: /* Speculation */ new section

2009-04-24T22:13:09Z

Speculation: new section

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imported>Ryangibsonstewart: /* Speculation */ new section

2009-04-24T22:13:09Z

Speculation: new section

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	A note about semicolon usage: I think sometimes you're mixing up semicolons and commas. A good rule of thumb is to make sure that the segments of the sentence separated by the semicolon are both sentences that can stand on their own. For instance, <tt>Sabine is partnered with Julien Dumont by Bob Bishop; who also tasked Sabine with protecting Dumont.</tt> is an incorrect use of the semicolon because "who also tasked Sabine with protecting Dumont" cannot stand on its own as a sentence. A better way to say this would be <tt>Sabine is partnered with Julien Dumont by Bob Bishop; Bob tasked Sabine with protecting Dumont.</tt> because both segments work as sentences on their own. An even better way would be to keep the original sentence, but to use a comma instead of a semicolon: <tt>Sabine is partnered with Julien Dumont by Bob Bishop, who also tasked Sabine with protecting Dumont.</tt> Hope that helps. See [[Help:Style#Colons and Semicolons]] for more technical info. Thanks! -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 10:48, 18 October 2008 (EDT)		A note about semicolon usage: I think sometimes you're mixing up semicolons and commas. A good rule of thumb is to make sure that the segments of the sentence separated by the semicolon are both sentences that can stand on their own. For instance, <tt>Sabine is partnered with Julien Dumont by Bob Bishop; who also tasked Sabine with protecting Dumont.</tt> is an incorrect use of the semicolon because "who also tasked Sabine with protecting Dumont" cannot stand on its own as a sentence. A better way to say this would be <tt>Sabine is partnered with Julien Dumont by Bob Bishop; Bob tasked Sabine with protecting Dumont.</tt> because both segments work as sentences on their own. An even better way would be to keep the original sentence, but to use a comma instead of a semicolon: <tt>Sabine is partnered with Julien Dumont by Bob Bishop, who also tasked Sabine with protecting Dumont.</tt> Hope that helps. See [[Help:Style#Colons and Semicolons]] for more technical info. Thanks! -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 10:48, 18 October 2008 (EDT)

			== Speculation ==

			Some of your edits have quite a bit of speculation. For instance, I may be wrong, but I know of no evidence that suggests Angela helped fake Leona's death, or that was associated with the Company's dealings. This is not the first time you have been warned about your edits, and I am afraid that you are ignoring the messages on this page. Please respond back [[User talk:Ryangibsonstewart\|on my talk page]] about this and the other topics above so that I know you are getting these important messages. Thank you. -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 18:13, 24 April 2009 (EDT)

imported>Ryangibsonstewart: /* Hey */

2009-04-17T23:48:22Z

Hey

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	Just wanted to thank you for some of your contributions. I've noticed that you tend to expand on information that isn't really necessary, which can cause articles to get a bit lengthy. For example, the Cushing article I trimmed down because the information you put wasn't relevant to him. Also, the Meredith Gordon info was already available in episode summaries and in her info box. Also, where did you get the Heroes Evolution note about her? Thanks.--{{User:Baldbobbo/sig}} 18:28, 9 September 2008 (EDT)		Just wanted to thank you for some of your contributions. I've noticed that you tend to expand on information that isn't really necessary, which can cause articles to get a bit lengthy. For example, the Cushing article I trimmed down because the information you put wasn't relevant to him. Also, the Meredith Gordon info was already available in episode summaries and in her info box. Also, where did you get the Heroes Evolution note about her? Thanks.--{{User:Baldbobbo/sig}} 18:28, 9 September 2008 (EDT)
	* Hi, Thunder77. You have some very nice edits and I like that you're really trying to keep the wiki updated--it's very helpful! Just a word of caution, though--some of your recent [[Special:Contributions/Thunder77\|contributions]] have had a bit of speculation in them. Just be careful not to inject your own theories into your edits, but rather stick to the facts and what's been revealed. I know it can be very tempting sometimes! :) If you're not sure of something, feel free to ask, or to leave a message on the talk pages. Thanks! -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 16:07, 14 September 2008 (EDT)		* Hi, Thunder77. You have some very nice edits and I like that you're really trying to keep the wiki updated--it's very helpful! Just a word of caution, though--some of your recent [[Special:Contributions/Thunder77\|contributions]] have had a bit of speculation in them. Just be careful not to inject your own theories into your edits, but rather stick to the facts and what's been revealed. I know it can be very tempting sometimes! :) If you're not sure of something, feel free to ask, or to leave a message on the talk pages. Thanks! -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 16:07, 14 September 2008 (EDT)
			** Hi, Thunder. You are continuing to be speculative in your edits. There is no proof--or even, really, suggestion--that Gordon Hovey is an LAWR agent, that Micah has stopped his schooling, or the Sparrow has anything at all to do with LAWR or helping evolved humans. Also, saying things like Doyle is a "truely evil man" and that he "finally gained a conscience" is biased. Please utilize discussion pages before adding potentially speculative and theoretical information. Thank you. -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 19:48, 17 April 2009 (EDT)

	== Formal name ==		== Formal name ==

imported>Ryangibsonstewart: /* Capitalization */

2008-10-25T00:03:46Z

Capitalization

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	Hey there, Thunder. I just wanted to give you a couple of tips because you make a lot of edits--the content is usually very strong, so I wanted to help you a bit with your style, specifically with capitalization. Titles only get capitalized if they're used as part of a proper noun. For instance, Bridget Bailey was an '''a'''gent for the Company, but '''A'''gent Bailey is now dead. Likewise, '''A'''gent Bennet is now working with a new '''a'''gent as a partner. Hope that helps! Let me know if you have any questions...and keep up the good work! -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 21:42, 17 October 2008 (EDT)		Hey there, Thunder. I just wanted to give you a couple of tips because you make a lot of edits--the content is usually very strong, so I wanted to help you a bit with your style, specifically with capitalization. Titles only get capitalized if they're used as part of a proper noun. For instance, Bridget Bailey was an '''a'''gent for the Company, but '''A'''gent Bailey is now dead. Likewise, '''A'''gent Bennet is now working with a new '''a'''gent as a partner. Hope that helps! Let me know if you have any questions...and keep up the good work! -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 21:42, 17 October 2008 (EDT)
			* Please stop capitalizing "agent" unless it's used as part of the person's name. "Here comes '''A'''gent Thompson" vs. "Thompson is an '''a'''gent of the Company." -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 20:03, 24 October 2008 (EDT)

	== Semicolons ==		== Semicolons ==

imported>Ryangibsonstewart: /* Semicolons */ new section

2008-10-18T14:48:44Z

Semicolons: new section

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	Hey there, Thunder. I just wanted to give you a couple of tips because you make a lot of edits--the content is usually very strong, so I wanted to help you a bit with your style, specifically with capitalization. Titles only get capitalized if they're used as part of a proper noun. For instance, Bridget Bailey was an '''a'''gent for the Company, but '''A'''gent Bailey is now dead. Likewise, '''A'''gent Bennet is now working with a new '''a'''gent as a partner. Hope that helps! Let me know if you have any questions...and keep up the good work! -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 21:42, 17 October 2008 (EDT)		Hey there, Thunder. I just wanted to give you a couple of tips because you make a lot of edits--the content is usually very strong, so I wanted to help you a bit with your style, specifically with capitalization. Titles only get capitalized if they're used as part of a proper noun. For instance, Bridget Bailey was an '''a'''gent for the Company, but '''A'''gent Bailey is now dead. Likewise, '''A'''gent Bennet is now working with a new '''a'''gent as a partner. Hope that helps! Let me know if you have any questions...and keep up the good work! -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 21:42, 17 October 2008 (EDT)

			== Semicolons ==

			A note about semicolon usage: I think sometimes you're mixing up semicolons and commas. A good rule of thumb is to make sure that the segments of the sentence separated by the semicolon are both sentences that can stand on their own. For instance, <tt>Sabine is partnered with Julien Dumont by Bob Bishop; who also tasked Sabine with protecting Dumont.</tt> is an incorrect use of the semicolon because "who also tasked Sabine with protecting Dumont" cannot stand on its own as a sentence. A better way to say this would be <tt>Sabine is partnered with Julien Dumont by Bob Bishop; Bob tasked Sabine with protecting Dumont.</tt> because both segments work as sentences on their own. An even better way would be to keep the original sentence, but to use a comma instead of a semicolon: <tt>Sabine is partnered with Julien Dumont by Bob Bishop, who also tasked Sabine with protecting Dumont.</tt> Hope that helps. See [[Help:Style#Colons and Semicolons]] for more technical info. Thanks! -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 10:48, 18 October 2008 (EDT)

imported>Ryangibsonstewart: /* Capitalization */ sign

2008-10-18T01:42:51Z

Capitalization: sign

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	== [[Help:Style#Capitalization of titles\|Capitalization]] ==		== [[Help:Style#Capitalization of titles\|Capitalization]] ==

	Hey there, Thunder. I just wanted to give you a couple of tips because you make a lot of edits--the content is usually very strong, so I wanted to help you a bit with your style, specifically with capitalization. Titles only get capitalized if they're used as part of a proper noun. For instance, Bridget Bailey was an '''a'''gent for the Company, but '''A'''gent Bailey is now dead. Likewise, '''A'''gent Bennet is now working with a new '''a'''gent as a partner. Hope that helps! Let me know if you have any questions...and keep up the good work!		Hey there, Thunder. I just wanted to give you a couple of tips because you make a lot of edits--the content is usually very strong, so I wanted to help you a bit with your style, specifically with capitalization. Titles only get capitalized if they're used as part of a proper noun. For instance, Bridget Bailey was an '''a'''gent for the Company, but '''A'''gent Bailey is now dead. Likewise, '''A'''gent Bennet is now working with a new '''a'''gent as a partner. Hope that helps! Let me know if you have any questions...and keep up the good work! -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 21:42, 17 October 2008 (EDT)

imported>Ryangibsonstewart: /* Capitalization */ new section

2008-10-18T01:42:31Z

Capitalization: new section

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	When updating character pages, the formal name is only added if it's different than the article's name. For instance, since [[Ted Sprague]]'s full name is Theodore Sprague, the formal name should reflect that. But for somebody like [[Lori Tremmel]], that ''is'' her formal name, so nothing needs to be inputted for her. -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 03:55, 28 September 2008 (EDT)		When updating character pages, the formal name is only added if it's different than the article's name. For instance, since [[Ted Sprague]]'s full name is Theodore Sprague, the formal name should reflect that. But for somebody like [[Lori Tremmel]], that ''is'' her formal name, so nothing needs to be inputted for her. -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 03:55, 28 September 2008 (EDT)
	* Again, please only add the formal name if it's different than the title of the article. Thanks! -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 19:24, 1 October 2008 (EDT)		* Again, please only add the formal name if it's different than the title of the article. Thanks! -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 19:24, 1 October 2008 (EDT)

			== [[Help:Style#Capitalization of titles\|Capitalization]] ==

			Hey there, Thunder. I just wanted to give you a couple of tips because you make a lot of edits--the content is usually very strong, so I wanted to help you a bit with your style, specifically with capitalization. Titles only get capitalized if they're used as part of a proper noun. For instance, Bridget Bailey was an '''a'''gent for the Company, but '''A'''gent Bailey is now dead. Likewise, '''A'''gent Bennet is now working with a new '''a'''gent as a partner. Hope that helps! Let me know if you have any questions...and keep up the good work!

imported>Ryangibsonstewart: /* Formal name */

2008-10-01T23:24:03Z

Formal name

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	When updating character pages, the formal name is only added if it's different than the article's name. For instance, since [[Ted Sprague]]'s full name is Theodore Sprague, the formal name should reflect that. But for somebody like [[Lori Tremmel]], that ''is'' her formal name, so nothing needs to be inputted for her. -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 03:55, 28 September 2008 (EDT)		When updating character pages, the formal name is only added if it's different than the article's name. For instance, since [[Ted Sprague]]'s full name is Theodore Sprague, the formal name should reflect that. But for somebody like [[Lori Tremmel]], that ''is'' her formal name, so nothing needs to be inputted for her. -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 03:55, 28 September 2008 (EDT)
			* Again, please only add the formal name if it's different than the title of the article. Thanks! -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 19:24, 1 October 2008 (EDT)

imported>Ryangibsonstewart: /* Formal name */ new section

2008-09-28T07:55:40Z

Formal name: new section

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	Just wanted to thank you for some of your contributions. I've noticed that you tend to expand on information that isn't really necessary, which can cause articles to get a bit lengthy. For example, the Cushing article I trimmed down because the information you put wasn't relevant to him. Also, the Meredith Gordon info was already available in episode summaries and in her info box. Also, where did you get the Heroes Evolution note about her? Thanks.--{{User:Baldbobbo/sig}} 18:28, 9 September 2008 (EDT)		Just wanted to thank you for some of your contributions. I've noticed that you tend to expand on information that isn't really necessary, which can cause articles to get a bit lengthy. For example, the Cushing article I trimmed down because the information you put wasn't relevant to him. Also, the Meredith Gordon info was already available in episode summaries and in her info box. Also, where did you get the Heroes Evolution note about her? Thanks.--{{User:Baldbobbo/sig}} 18:28, 9 September 2008 (EDT)
	* Hi, Thunder77. You have some very nice edits and I like that you're really trying to keep the wiki updated--it's very helpful! Just a word of caution, though--some of your recent [[Special:Contributions/Thunder77\|contributions]] have had a bit of speculation in them. Just be careful not to inject your own theories into your edits, but rather stick to the facts and what's been revealed. I know it can be very tempting sometimes! :) If you're not sure of something, feel free to ask, or to leave a message on the talk pages. Thanks! -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 16:07, 14 September 2008 (EDT)		* Hi, Thunder77. You have some very nice edits and I like that you're really trying to keep the wiki updated--it's very helpful! Just a word of caution, though--some of your recent [[Special:Contributions/Thunder77\|contributions]] have had a bit of speculation in them. Just be careful not to inject your own theories into your edits, but rather stick to the facts and what's been revealed. I know it can be very tempting sometimes! :) If you're not sure of something, feel free to ask, or to leave a message on the talk pages. Thanks! -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 16:07, 14 September 2008 (EDT)

			== Formal name ==

			When updating character pages, the formal name is only added if it's different than the article's name. For instance, since [[Ted Sprague]]'s full name is Theodore Sprague, the formal name should reflect that. But for somebody like [[Lori Tremmel]], that ''is'' her formal name, so nothing needs to be inputted for her. -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 03:55, 28 September 2008 (EDT)

imported>Ryangibsonstewart: /* Hey */

2008-09-14T20:07:28Z

Hey

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	Just wanted to thank you for some of your contributions. I've noticed that you tend to expand on information that isn't really necessary, which can cause articles to get a bit lengthy. For example, the Cushing article I trimmed down because the information you put wasn't relevant to him. Also, the Meredith Gordon info was already available in episode summaries and in her info box. Also, where did you get the Heroes Evolution note about her? Thanks.--{{User:Baldbobbo/sig}} 18:28, 9 September 2008 (EDT)		Just wanted to thank you for some of your contributions. I've noticed that you tend to expand on information that isn't really necessary, which can cause articles to get a bit lengthy. For example, the Cushing article I trimmed down because the information you put wasn't relevant to him. Also, the Meredith Gordon info was already available in episode summaries and in her info box. Also, where did you get the Heroes Evolution note about her? Thanks.--{{User:Baldbobbo/sig}} 18:28, 9 September 2008 (EDT)
			* Hi, Thunder77. You have some very nice edits and I like that you're really trying to keep the wiki updated--it's very helpful! Just a word of caution, though--some of your recent [[Special:Contributions/Thunder77\|contributions]] have had a bit of speculation in them. Just be careful not to inject your own theories into your edits, but rather stick to the facts and what's been revealed. I know it can be very tempting sometimes! :) If you're not sure of something, feel free to ask, or to leave a message on the talk pages. Thanks! -- {{User:Ryangibsonstewart/sig}} 16:07, 14 September 2008 (EDT)