iStory:The Private/chapter 304 alternatives - Revision history

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	This page notes the different possible versions of chapter 4 of [[The Private]].		This page notes the different '''possible versions of chapter 4 of [[The Private]]'''.

	==Options (I)==		==Options (I)==

imported>Ryangibsonstewart: The Private chapter summaries/chapter 304 alternatives moved to iStory:The Private/chapter 304 alternatives: move to iStory namespace, per this discussion

2010-02-14T01:40:26Z

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	\|Rachel chooses to investigate weird moaning that is coming from the medical ward. On a far table, under a dim construction light, Rachel spots a vaguely female shape laying in a tangle of wires and tubes. She appears to be about Rachel's age, light-skinned, but Rachel cannot tell her nationality.		\|Rachel chooses to investigate weird moaning that is coming from the medical ward. On a far table, under a dim construction light, Rachel spots a vaguely female shape laying in a tangle of wires and tubes. She appears to be about Rachel's age, light-skinned, but Rachel cannot tell her nationality.

	As Rachel gets closer, she can see that her "table" ~~was~~ a tray, half-full of a blue-ish chemical that is being pumped in through a tube like a garden hose. Her arms and legs were swollen, bulging, as if full of liquid. The girl has IVs in both arms with her eyes half-open. Rachel notes that she seems unconscious, and then pauses her story to calm herself from the fresh memories.		As Rachel gets closer, she can see that her "table" is a tray, half-full of a blue-ish chemical that is being pumped in through a tube like a garden hose. Her arms and legs were swollen, bulging, as if full of liquid. The girl has IVs in both arms with her eyes half-open. Rachel notes that she seems unconscious, and then pauses her story to calm herself from the fresh memories.

	The [[interviewer]] asks Rachel what happened next, and Rachel says that she tried to free her. He asks again what happened and she continues that the girl attacked her. The interviewer notes that her reaction was not what she expected. Rachel responds that she thinks the girl was just afraid, but whatever the facility was doing to her made her powerful. The interviewer notes that Rachel did survive. Rachel replies that the girl would have killed her, but the men outside came into the ward and the girl turned on them. When that happened, Rachel took the opportunity to run away.		The [[interviewer]] asks Rachel what happened next, and Rachel says that she tried to free her. He asks again what happened and she continues that the girl attacked her. The interviewer notes that her reaction was not what she expected. Rachel responds that she thinks the girl was just afraid, but whatever the facility was doing to her made her powerful. The interviewer notes that Rachel did survive. Rachel replies that the girl would have killed her, but the men outside came into the ward and the girl turned on them. When that happened, Rachel took the opportunity to run away.

imported>MiamiVolts: gr

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	Rachel questions how the interviewer knows that, noting that information wasn't in the official account. The interviewer replies that it certainly wasn't in the account, as officially they crossed the Iraq-Iran border, attacked an Iranian army convoy and were captured. This caused a stir in the local media, and the U.S. government demoted Rachel to Private, punishing her to hush the situation. Rachel responds that the real story is crazy, but they have to believe her, and the interviewer says that they do. Just then, Jim walks through the door and says hello.		Rachel questions how the interviewer knows that, noting that information wasn't in the official account. The interviewer replies that it certainly wasn't in the account, as officially they crossed the Iraq-Iran border, attacked an Iranian army convoy and were captured. This caused a stir in the local media, and the U.S. government demoted Rachel to Private, punishing her to hush the situation. Rachel responds that the real story is crazy, but they have to believe her, and the interviewer says that they do. Just then, Jim walks through the door and says hello.

	As the memories of what happened in [[Iran]] come flooding back to Rachel, she asks Jim if he was working for these guys. Jim replies that he ~~isn~~'t, and that he just started. Jim continues that he told them their story, and they were very interested.		As the memories of what happened in [[Iran]] come flooding back to Rachel, she asks Jim if he was working for these guys. Jim replies that he wasn't, and that he just started. Jim continues that he told them their story, and they were very interested.

	==Options (II)==		==Options (II)==

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	The interviewer then continues Rachel's story for her, thumbing through his notes. He says Rachel found Jim on the hill, and then they made their way toward the border. However, on the way, they were met by a helicopter hired by Jim's employer.		The interviewer then continues Rachel's story for her, thumbing through his notes. He says Rachel found Jim on the hill, and then they made their way toward the border. However, on the way, they were met by a helicopter hired by Jim's employer.

	Rachel questions how the interviewer knows that, noting that information wasn't in the official account. The ~~interview~~ replies that it certainly wasn't in the account, as officially they crossed the Iraq-Iran border, attacked an Iranian army convoy and were captured. This caused a stir in the local media, and the U.S. government demoted Rachel to Private, punishing her to hush the situation. Rachel responds that the real story is crazy, but they have to believe her, and the interviewer says that they do. Just then, Jim walks through the door and says hello.		Rachel questions how the interviewer knows that, noting that information wasn't in the official account. The interviewer replies that it certainly wasn't in the account, as officially they crossed the Iraq-Iran border, attacked an Iranian army convoy and were captured. This caused a stir in the local media, and the U.S. government demoted Rachel to Private, punishing her to hush the situation. Rachel responds that the real story is crazy, but they have to believe her, and the interviewer says that they do. Just then, Jim walks through the door and says hello.

	As the memories of what happened in [[Iran]] come flooding back to Rachel, she asks Jim if he was working for these guys. Jim replies that he isn't, and that he just started. Jim continues that he told them their story, and they were very interested.		As the memories of what happened in [[Iran]] come flooding back to Rachel, she asks Jim if he was working for these guys. Jim replies that he isn't, and that he just started. Jim continues that he told them their story, and they were very interested.

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	==Notes==		==Notes==
	* Using Option 1B is specified as the official storyline, and it allows Rachel to discover and rescue a captive girl. Having followed the optimal cases from previous chapters, Rachel should also choose Option 2A.1A and Option 3B. Option 2A.1A allows Rachel to learn that Jim's employer, [[Jeremy Woo]], was killed by terrorists in a dam explosion, and allows the player to realize that Jim is the Primatech contractor that was featured in the previous iStory, [[Friend or Foe]]. It also confirmed for the player that the ending of [[Friend or Foe]] was one in which the contractor was tied up by the [[Kill Squad]] and left to watch the dam get destroyed. Option 3A would have required Rachel to kill the moaning girl by removing the tube attached to her instead of the IVs, but the official storyline for that chapter is that Rachel frees her by detaching the IVs. Going with Option 3B also appears to get the interviewer more on Rachel's side, as he tells her that their organization is going to help her get some answers only in that option.		* Using Option 1B is specified as the official storyline, and it allows Rachel to discover and rescue a captive girl. Having followed the optimal cases from previous chapters, Rachel should also choose Option 2A.1A and Option 3B. Option 2A.1A allows Rachel to learn that Jim knows something about Rachel's file that was in the facility, but refuses to tell her informing her of the danger of discussing it around their new employers. She also learns that Jim's employer, [[Jeremy Woo]], was killed by terrorists in a dam explosion, and allows the player to realize that Jim is the Primatech contractor that was featured in the previous iStory, [[Friend or Foe]]. It also confirmed for the player that the ending of [[Friend or Foe]] was one in which the contractor was tied up by the [[Kill Squad]] and left to watch the dam get destroyed. Option 3A would have required Rachel to kill the moaning girl by removing the tube attached to her instead of the IVs, but the official storyline for that chapter is that Rachel frees her by detaching the IVs. Going with Option 3B also appears to get the interviewer more on Rachel's side, as he tells her that their organization is going to help her get some answers only in that option.

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 |Jim replies that he has been around, noting he he has been doing security work in England and Alaska. Rachel asks what company he was working for, but Jim only says that they went out of business so that is why he applied to work here. Rachel replies that she sees that he is here, and then they both spend a minute in silence. Rachel thinks that Jim is not telling her something and notes to herself that it looks like he had a rough trip. She guesses she knows the feeling he must be having as her [[Pinehearst Company|previous employer]] shut down hard as well. The silence is ended when the interviewer returns and Jim steps away.
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imported>MiamiVolts: /* Options (II) */

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	{\| class="wikitable collapsible collapsed" width="100%"		{\| class="wikitable collapsible collapsed" width="100%"
	!Option 2A.2<br />(Followed case):<br />If Rachel was told that she was being followed...		!Option 2A.2<br />(Followed case):<br />If Rachel was told that she was being followed...
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	\|Rachel tells Jim that she is starting to piece together some of what happened to her, and notes that her interrogator in Iran said she was being followed. Jim says that is weird. Rachel continues that Jim mysteriously turned up at that time, and she thinks he was following her. Jim claims it was just coincidence, but admits it is true when Rachel tells him she knows he is lying. While sighing, Jim adds that his employer is gone, but she still shouldn't ask him why he was following her. He asks Rachel to put it behind her for her own sake. The interviewer then returns carrying a camera and Jim walks out without even looking back.		\|Rachel tells Jim that she is starting to piece together some of what happened to her, and notes that her interrogator in Iran said she was being followed. Jim says that is weird. Rachel continues that Jim mysteriously turned up at that time, and she thinks he was following her. Jim claims it was just coincidence, but admits it is true when Rachel tells him she knows he is lying. While sighing, Jim adds that his employer is gone, but she still shouldn't ask him why he was following her. He asks Rachel to put it behind her for her own sake. The interviewer then returns carrying a camera and Jim walks out without even looking back.
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	!Option 2A.3<br />(Interviewer case):<br />Rachel and Jim wait for the interviewer to return...		!Option 2A.3<br />(Interviewer case):<br />Rachel and Jim wait for the interviewer to return...
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	\|...and Jim steps away when the interviewer returns moments later.		\|...and Jim steps away when the interviewer returns moments later.
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	!<span id="Option 2B">Option 2B</span> (Company case): If Rachel learned that Jim worked for a paper company...		!<span id="Option 2B">Option 2B</span> (Company case): If Rachel learned that Jim worked for a paper company...
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	\|The interviewer says he will let Jim and Rachel catch up and leaves the office, saying he needs to speak with his superiors. Once he leaves, Rachel comments that here Jim is, working for another security company. Jim then asks if that is what they told her it is. Rachel responds by saying that she is not surprised it's not after seeing him here. She adds that he said he worked for a "paper company" in Iraq and then he got them picked up by a helicopter of the sort she has only seen used by Special Forces. Jim smiles and admits that there is maybe a bit more to that, but doesn't add any more.		\|The interviewer says he will let Jim and Rachel catch up and leaves the office, saying he needs to speak with his superiors. Once he leaves, Rachel comments that here Jim is, working for another security company. Jim then asks if that is what they told her it is. Rachel responds by saying that she is not surprised it's not after seeing him here. She adds that he said he worked for a "paper company" in Iraq and then he got them picked up by a helicopter of the sort she has only seen used by Special Forces. Jim smiles and admits that there is maybe a bit more to that, but doesn't add any more.

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	!<span id="Option 2C">Option 2C</span> (General case): Rachel asks what Jim has been up to...		!<span id="Option 2C">Option 2C</span> (General case): Rachel asks what Jim has been up to...
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	\|Jim replies that he has been around, noting he he has been doing security work in England and Alaska. Rachel asks what company he was working for, but Jim only says that they went out of business so that is why he applied to work here. Rachel replies that she sees that he is here, and then they both spend a minute in silence. Rachel thinks that Jim is not telling her something and notes to herself that it looks like he had a rough trip. She guesses she knows the feeling he must be having as her [[Pinehearst Company\|previous employer]] shut down hard as well. The silence is ended when the interviewer returns and Jim steps away.		\|Jim replies that he has been around, noting he he has been doing security work in England and Alaska. Rachel asks what company he was working for, but Jim only says that they went out of business so that is why he applied to work here. Rachel replies that she sees that he is here, and then they both spend a minute in silence. Rachel thinks that Jim is not telling her something and notes to herself that it looks like he had a rough trip. She guesses she knows the feeling he must be having as her [[Pinehearst Company\|previous employer]] shut down hard as well. The silence is ended when the interviewer returns and Jim steps away.
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