This wiki is a XML full dump clone of "Heroes Wiki", the main wiki about the Heroes saga that has been shut down permanently since June 1, 2020. The purpose of this wiki is to keep online an exhaustive and accurate database about the franchise.
User talk:Danko/Claire's Victims: Difference between revisions
Jump to navigation
Jump to search
imported>Ryangibsonstewart New page: I left this message on my talk page, but I'll copy it here, too, since it's relevant to this page. There are quite a few things that need to be ch... |
imported>Ryangibsonstewart New page: I left this message on my talk page, but I'll copy it here, too, since it's relevant to this page. There are quite a few things that need to be ch... |
(No difference)
| |
Latest revision as of 21:31, 8 June 2009
I left this message on my talk page, but I'll copy it here, too, since it's relevant to this page. There are quite a few things that need to be changed on this page so it stylistically meets the standards of Heroes Wiki. For instance, the title shouldn't be capitalized. You've got an empty section that doesn't need to be there, which also means that the "Other Victims" subheading can be removed. You have sentences with no periods. "After going after" sounds awkward. You need to work on some of your antecedents. -- RyanGibsonStewart (talk) 17:30, 8 June 2009 (EDT)