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Done like it now.All we need is image ;) [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 15:16, 20 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop |
Done like it now.All we need is image ;) [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 15:16, 20 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop |
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== My Page == |
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No, where are they :). Also I have commented on Witchy2006's talk page, I think he is being really unfair. I would try not to rise to it though as it makes you seem as bad as him (you're not though). --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 14:58, 20 March 2009 (EDT) |
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Ok thanks for the witchy2006 thing,he does make me upset sometimes but i wont say anything. and if u check recent changes you will find my page and cockney heroes :) [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 15:00, 20 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop |
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* Great, it's ok bout the witchy thing. I moved ability diminishment to your username page, it is simpler if all the cockney heroes pages are in your username space. P.S instead of making it a fan power, make it look like a normal power and add it to the fan power section. |
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** Added one, I basically inverted the colours on the aura absorbtion page. g2g for now --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 15:20, 20 March 2009 (EDT) |
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*** I created by Cockney heroes page here [[User:Gabriel Bishop/Irony]], you will need to do one for you, claude, abigail and some others. O.K. --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 15:56, 20 March 2009 (EDT) |
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** I added the ability diminishment page, we should also create the first episode, if you write it I'll add and we can make a final version. The first version should be about out first person to save, and later we can have a flashback episode about how we met per say. --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 16:07, 20 March 2009 (EDT) |
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*** Great,btw we need a volume name and I was thinking i could dissapear in Finale .Thats what happens to me the government take me to flat 52 in kirby plaza where my chracter mna saves me :) [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 16:12, 20 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop |
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**** Great sounds good, but we need to see how the volume pans out. The volume could be called '''Persued''' or '''stalked''' --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 16:17, 20 March 2009 (EDT) |
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***** i was gonna say '''Hidden''' or '''Wanted''' or my favourite '''In The Shadows''' [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 16:21, 20 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop |
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**** Definately in the shadows, it's great. If you start the first episode of Volume 1 I'll fix it up later. O.K See you --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 16:24, 20 March 2009 (EDT) |
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***** kk i'll start ep 2moz and write some diffrernt stuff :) [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 16:28, 20 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop |
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**** I'm going out but if you write the first episode now, in about 3/4 hours I can fix it up :) --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 07:04, 21 March 2009 (EDT) |
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Sure [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 16:28, 20 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop |
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== 1.01 Hidden in the Darkness == |
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Firstly, brilliant job, I would never have thought of that. Just a few points I want to discuss before I change it: |
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# '''Powers and People''' ~ We need to have our own seperate page for powers and for people. For example we need to have User:Gabriel Bishop/Abigail and User:Gabriel Bishop/Pyrokinesis. You can make them or I can depending on what you want. But remember we need to have it for everyone in the story and every power. |
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# '''Writing Technique''' ~ I can see why you want to add as many people in as possible, I would as well, but because it is this short, cut out Abigail, Claude and Lee. Just have this one focus on us training Derek Simmond, this will make it more conscise. Have the company agent come into our training facility, so to speak. |
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# '''Conflicting Timeline''' ~ if it is a company agent it must be happening before the company collapse + Danko. Therefore this should be in the Volume 3 timeline, and the next volume in the volume 4 timeline, so we become rebel in the next volume. |
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# '''Ability Diminshment''' ~ I think that we should make the power so that when I drain an ability I can use it while draining or I am very weak, what do you think about this? (Do you like the page by the way). |
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# '''Stuff we need to do way later''' after this volume we should create pages like AT trackers, but this is much later on. |
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# '''Overall Length''' When I go over it I will probably make it a bit longer as it is quite short. |
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# '''Actual Cockney Heroes Page''' We should make this just an intro page, and make a seperate page for each Volume. |
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# '''Namespace''' I'm not sure if we're allowed to do this but we should consider moving it to the '''User:Cockney Heroes''' namespace. I might ask Ryan if we're allowed later. |
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Anyway, that's about it. I now this sounds really, really negative, but this is the first episode, we need to make this is right before we do anything else. Let me just say: Brilliant Episode, can't wait for the next one, Can't wait for Elle episode and love the Jack the Ripper episode title. Really good job :) --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 15:25, 21 March 2009 (EDT) |
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* Thanks,first of all I wanted to get rid of abigail and lee but keep Claude,secondally the actuall storyline is set as the recruit and will continue to volume 4 and finally i'll do assigment trackers i did mine ages ago,we should still keeep proper power pages and volume 2 is about finding Gabriel Bishop :) [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 16:16, 21 March 2009 (EDT) |
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** The timeline makes sense now, so Volumer one is in Villans, as volume 2 should be. And then volume 3 or our story should tie in with volume four of heroes. What do you think about me accessing powers when draining them? To make it fair, we should have all the stories on your page with characters and then (so as not to clog up your namespace) the powers + AT trackers on my namespace. When you get rid of Abigail and Lee I will go over it. (Also should we try and keep the company agent prisoner for information about the company). When I go over it I will also add tex tot pad it out a bit. Also, what do you think about splitting the volume pages? --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 08:01, 22 March 2009 (EDT) |
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*** I was thinking that Season 1 would be Volume 1 2 and 3 and that it would be set around Powerless to A Clear And present Danger :) [[User:Gabriel Bishop|Gabriel Bishop]] 11:40, 22 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop |
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** Makes sense :) What do you think about me accessing powers when draining them? Do you want to mve the powers + AT trackers to my namespace so as not to clog up yours? Oh, and when you get rid of Lee + Abigail I will fix it up and add some more. --{{User:Irony/Signature}} 11:53, 22 March 2009 (EDT) |
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Revision as of 15:57, 22 March 2009
Hello, Irony
Talk Archive (1)
--IronyUTC CH 12:28, 6 February 2009 (EST)
Patrolling
Hey, Irony. How would you like to be a patroller here? Take a look at Heroes Wiki:Patrollers and see if it's something you'd like to do. If so, reply back to my talk page. Let me know if you have any questions. Thanks! -- RyanGibsonStewart (talk) 22:52, 11 March 2009 (EDT)
- Hey mate congrats on becoming one, I already thought you were one. Oh well no harm done, again congrats.--Steely McBeam - (talk) 12:43, 12 March 2009 (EDT)
- Irony, I've added you to the patrollers group. Welcome! :) (Admin 12:47, 12 March 2009 (EDT))
- Thanks for adding me, I hope to help. Do I need to add myself to the patrollers page? --IronyUTC CH 12:49, 12 March 2009 (EDT)
- Thanks, I also thought you were already one too :) I also think you deserve it.--posted by Laughingdevilboy
- Thanks for adding me, I hope to help. Do I need to add myself to the patrollers page? --IronyUTC CH 12:49, 12 March 2009 (EDT)
Talk 13:09, 12 March 2009 (EDT)
- To be honest, I thought you were one :) --IronyUTC CH 13:11, 12 March 2009 (EDT)
- Ha ha, since we have been promoted at the same time, we can help each other out :) --posted by Laughingdevilboy
- To be honest, I thought you were one :) --IronyUTC CH 13:11, 12 March 2009 (EDT)
Talk 13:14, 12 March 2009 (EDT)
- Looks like Admin added you earlier today. Awesome--thanks Admin! Heroes Wiki:Patrollers has great tips, etc. Don't forget to add your name to the page. Try patrolling some unpatrolled edits. Let me know if you have any questions. If I'm not around, feel free to ask one of the patrollers who has been doing it a bit longer, or leave a message at Heroes Wiki talk:Patrollers (which is a page I suggest you add to your watchlist). Congrats! :) -- RyanGibsonStewart (talk) 15:30, 12 March 2009 (EDT)
Hey
Hi when can you help with the Cockney Heroes page ? Gabriel Bishop 13:13, 16 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop
Hey could you help me on the Cockney Heroes page ? Gabriel Bishop 12:32, 17 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop
Ok first of all we have to create the characters apart from Claude and Gabriel Bishop and maybe u ? Gabriel Bishop 12:43, 17 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop
Can you go on Msn so we can discuss the volume ? :) Gabriel Bishop 17:11, 17 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop
Pages
Hi have you seen Cockney Heroes and Ur ability page ? Gabriel Bishop 14:54, 20 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop
Done like it now.All we need is image ;) Gabriel Bishop 15:16, 20 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop
My Page
No, where are they :). Also I have commented on Witchy2006's talk page, I think he is being really unfair. I would try not to rise to it though as it makes you seem as bad as him (you're not though). --IronyUTC CH 14:58, 20 March 2009 (EDT)
Ok thanks for the witchy2006 thing,he does make me upset sometimes but i wont say anything. and if u check recent changes you will find my page and cockney heroes :) Gabriel Bishop 15:00, 20 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop
- Great, it's ok bout the witchy thing. I moved ability diminishment to your username page, it is simpler if all the cockney heroes pages are in your username space. P.S instead of making it a fan power, make it look like a normal power and add it to the fan power section.
- Added one, I basically inverted the colours on the aura absorbtion page. g2g for now --IronyUTC CH 15:20, 20 March 2009 (EDT)
- I created by Cockney heroes page here User:Gabriel Bishop/Irony, you will need to do one for you, claude, abigail and some others. O.K. --IronyUTC CH 15:56, 20 March 2009 (EDT)
- I added the ability diminishment page, we should also create the first episode, if you write it I'll add and we can make a final version. The first version should be about out first person to save, and later we can have a flashback episode about how we met per say. --IronyUTC CH 16:07, 20 March 2009 (EDT)
- Great,btw we need a volume name and I was thinking i could dissapear in Finale .Thats what happens to me the government take me to flat 52 in kirby plaza where my chracter mna saves me :) Gabriel Bishop 16:12, 20 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop
- Great sounds good, but we need to see how the volume pans out. The volume could be called Persued or stalked --IronyUTC CH 16:17, 20 March 2009 (EDT)
- i was gonna say Hidden or Wanted or my favourite In The Shadows Gabriel Bishop 16:21, 20 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop
- Definately in the shadows, it's great. If you start the first episode of Volume 1 I'll fix it up later. O.K See you --IronyUTC CH 16:24, 20 March 2009 (EDT)
- kk i'll start ep 2moz and write some diffrernt stuff :) Gabriel Bishop 16:28, 20 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop
- I'm going out but if you write the first episode now, in about 3/4 hours I can fix it up :) --IronyUTC CH 07:04, 21 March 2009 (EDT)
- Great sounds good, but we need to see how the volume pans out. The volume could be called Persued or stalked --IronyUTC CH 16:17, 20 March 2009 (EDT)
- Great,btw we need a volume name and I was thinking i could dissapear in Finale .Thats what happens to me the government take me to flat 52 in kirby plaza where my chracter mna saves me :) Gabriel Bishop 16:12, 20 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop
- Added one, I basically inverted the colours on the aura absorbtion page. g2g for now --IronyUTC CH 15:20, 20 March 2009 (EDT)
Sure Gabriel Bishop 16:28, 20 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop
1.01 Hidden in the Darkness
Firstly, brilliant job, I would never have thought of that. Just a few points I want to discuss before I change it:
- Powers and People ~ We need to have our own seperate page for powers and for people. For example we need to have User:Gabriel Bishop/Abigail and User:Gabriel Bishop/Pyrokinesis. You can make them or I can depending on what you want. But remember we need to have it for everyone in the story and every power.
- Writing Technique ~ I can see why you want to add as many people in as possible, I would as well, but because it is this short, cut out Abigail, Claude and Lee. Just have this one focus on us training Derek Simmond, this will make it more conscise. Have the company agent come into our training facility, so to speak.
- Conflicting Timeline ~ if it is a company agent it must be happening before the company collapse + Danko. Therefore this should be in the Volume 3 timeline, and the next volume in the volume 4 timeline, so we become rebel in the next volume.
- Ability Diminshment ~ I think that we should make the power so that when I drain an ability I can use it while draining or I am very weak, what do you think about this? (Do you like the page by the way).
- Stuff we need to do way later after this volume we should create pages like AT trackers, but this is much later on.
- Overall Length When I go over it I will probably make it a bit longer as it is quite short.
- Actual Cockney Heroes Page We should make this just an intro page, and make a seperate page for each Volume.
- Namespace I'm not sure if we're allowed to do this but we should consider moving it to the User:Cockney Heroes namespace. I might ask Ryan if we're allowed later.
Anyway, that's about it. I now this sounds really, really negative, but this is the first episode, we need to make this is right before we do anything else. Let me just say: Brilliant Episode, can't wait for the next one, Can't wait for Elle episode and love the Jack the Ripper episode title. Really good job :) --IronyUTC CH 15:25, 21 March 2009 (EDT)
- Thanks,first of all I wanted to get rid of abigail and lee but keep Claude,secondally the actuall storyline is set as the recruit and will continue to volume 4 and finally i'll do assigment trackers i did mine ages ago,we should still keeep proper power pages and volume 2 is about finding Gabriel Bishop :) Gabriel Bishop 16:16, 21 March 2009 (EDT)
- The timeline makes sense now, so Volumer one is in Villans, as volume 2 should be. And then volume 3 or our story should tie in with volume four of heroes. What do you think about me accessing powers when draining them? To make it fair, we should have all the stories on your page with characters and then (so as not to clog up your namespace) the powers + AT trackers on my namespace. When you get rid of Abigail and Lee I will go over it. (Also should we try and keep the company agent prisoner for information about the company). When I go over it I will also add tex tot pad it out a bit. Also, what do you think about splitting the volume pages? --IronyUTC CH 08:01, 22 March 2009 (EDT)
- I was thinking that Season 1 would be Volume 1 2 and 3 and that it would be set around Powerless to A Clear And present Danger :) Gabriel Bishop 11:40, 22 March 2009 (EDT) Gabriel Bishop
- Makes sense :) What do you think about me accessing powers when draining them? Do you want to mve the powers + AT trackers to my namespace so as not to clog up yours? Oh, and when you get rid of Lee + Abigail I will fix it up and add some more. --IronyUTC CH 11:53, 22 March 2009 (EDT)
- The timeline makes sense now, so Volumer one is in Villans, as volume 2 should be. And then volume 3 or our story should tie in with volume four of heroes. What do you think about me accessing powers when draining them? To make it fair, we should have all the stories on your page with characters and then (so as not to clog up your namespace) the powers + AT trackers on my namespace. When you get rid of Abigail and Lee I will go over it. (Also should we try and keep the company agent prisoner for information about the company). When I go over it I will also add tex tot pad it out a bit. Also, what do you think about splitting the volume pages? --IronyUTC CH 08:01, 22 March 2009 (EDT)