Jason Badower/Blackout, Part 1

Jason Badower shares his original art and comments about his work on Blackout, Part 1.

Page 1

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  Jason said he was not as pleased with Blackout, Part 1 as some of his other Heroes novels. "I think my biggest mistake was to not go back and double check my layouts. While I'm happy with the art, I think there are some areas where the storytelling suffered."
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  "I hate sound effects. 'Shoonk' is one of my least favourite. There is no sound effect in the script. I thought it was pretty obvious that the lights go out--especially with the caption 'In the dark'."
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  "The great note I got back from NBC was that it looked like Hiro's and Mohinder's arms and hands were merging and hard to tell apart. As a cheat I also use the image of Peter and Nathan from The Death of Hana Gitelman."
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  Despite other problems in the novel, Jason feels that page one is one of the best pages of the set. However, he notes that there was no large splash page in the issue.

Page 2

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  Jason likens the disappointed feeling Heroes fans got from reading his comic as "going into a Kubrick movie and someone showing you a James Cameron film instead. It's not bad--it's just not what you wanted or expected."
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  Jason expresses concern about two issues on this page: Mohinder's head in the first panel seems uncomfortable, and the nurse's face in the third panel isn't worried enough. "If she's not worried, then the reader isn't worried."
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  "I like to think I have a very subtle comic book style. I like moody, realistic palettes. I like my people to look realistic. I like wide tiers to my panels as it resonates with what we see on the movie screen. I like consistent and dramatic lighting with powerful fill lights."

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  Jason outlines the problems with this page: "The first problem is that people aren't sure where [Mohinder's] being knocked into. Because of the heart attack patient established on the previous two pages, you instantly assume that he's being knocked into that room. That he gets knocked into another room is confusing...I should have had the heart attack patient visible in his room on panel 2 or 3 so we know that he's in another room."
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  "It feels to me like Mohinder is wheeling his arms trying to get his balance for a good 2-3 seconds while the director and the Primatech guy cross the floor towards each other to embrace. In my head it's like some Wile E. Coyote sketch. One solution is to place the salesman closer to the director...But if I did that, [it] would destroy the flow of the story."
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  Jason also felt it wasn't clear that the director was elbowing Mohinder, and wishes there was "a little, 'Oof!' from Mohinder on panel 3" and "maybe a small, 'Ah!' on panel 4." He also thinks that in his rush, he didn't use his best storytelling skills to properly convey the "It's not polite to stare" comment. "What I should have done was had Mohinder staring off panel to our right at the patient.

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Notes about Jason's drawings are taken from his weblog.