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User talk:Random guy/Nine Unknown Men
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So what do you guys think?
I am very new, and do not know much about formatting, and all that html (i think it is html right?) so I want to hear feedback from people? I can take criticism, I promise. Random guy 03:54, 11 November 2007 (EST)
- For your first article, it looks very nice! I haven't read through the whole thing, and I certainly haven't checked grammar and spelling with a fine-toothed comb, but it looks like you've organized the article very nicely. At first glance, here are a few quick suggestions: You might want to add some links, like to Joe Pokaski and Aron Coleite, to the CBR interview, to some of the powers, etc. You might also want to give some references to your claims--Rather than saying "Charles might have an ability that relates to this discipline as well if his ability is prophetic dreaming," tell a bit more of what we actually saw in the episode, and then use a parenthetical site to support your theory. Don't capitalize "e.g." Your "Miscellaneous" section should should probably have an extra set of equal signs on either side of the heading. I don't know very much about The Nine Men. You gave some good background information, but you might want to elaborate a bit more; external links, especially to Wikipedia, are a good idea. You can also add a lead description--I would take off the heading for the first section, make The Nine Unknown Men bold (since it's the name of the article) and italicized (since it's the name of a book). Don't forget to italicize Heroes..... Generally looks very nice, though--well done! -- RyanGibsonStewart (talk) 03:46, 11 November 2007 (EST)