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The history here needs a lot of work for grammar and [[help:style|style]] (particularly [[Help:perspective|perspective]] |
The history here needs a lot of work for grammar and [[help:style|style]] (particularly [[Help:perspective|perspective]] and [[Help:person|person]]). One consistent problem I've seen throughout is a problem with antecedents. For example, the ''[[Genesis]]'' history read "After getting his father's old taxi driver job, Mr. Bennet takes a ride in his taxi." Mr. Bennet did not get his father's old taxi job--Mohinder did. |
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The paragraphs should also be broken with two carriage returns instead of <br> tags.--[[User:Hardvice|Hardvice]] <small>[[User talk:Hardvice|(talk)]]</small> 12:56, 21 May 2007 (EDT) |
The paragraphs should also be broken with two carriage returns instead of <br> tags.--[[User:Hardvice|Hardvice]] <small>[[User talk:Hardvice|(talk)]]</small> 12:56, 21 May 2007 (EDT) |
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Revision as of 16:57, 21 May 2007
The history here needs a lot of work for grammar and style (particularly perspective and person). One consistent problem I've seen throughout is a problem with antecedents. For example, the Genesis history read "After getting his father's old taxi driver job, Mr. Bennet takes a ride in his taxi." Mr. Bennet did not get his father's old taxi job--Mohinder did.
The paragraphs should also be broken with two carriage returns instead of <br> tags.--Hardvice (talk) 12:56, 21 May 2007 (EDT)