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{{blurb}}'''A new villain trio is formed while a new evolved human hunter comes into the story line in the epic new story in the''' '''''[[User:Gulp-Ninja Series|Glup-Ninja Series]]'''''!'''{{blurbclose}} |
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==Summary== |
==Summary== |
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*[[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/Steve Orwall|A member]] is returned to [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/The LCK|the LCK]]. |
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*[[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/Gulp Ninja|Gulp]] and [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/Kaito Nakamura|Kaito]] makes orders to catch the Trio, which is formed by the only three prisoners in the history of the [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/The UNC|UNC]] escape. |
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==Story Development== |
==Story Development== |
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{{StoryDevelopment|links= [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/T.J. Luther|T.J. Luther]] · [[Telekinesis]] · The Trio · [[User:Danko/John Millard|John Millard]]}} |
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==Synopsis== |
==Synopsis== |
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''' ''THE YEAR IS 2004.'' ''' (Respectively 2 months before the UNC explosion.) |
''' ''THE YEAR IS 2004.'' ''' (Respectively 2 months before [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/The UNC|the UNC]] explosion.) |
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"Shh! Be quiet. They could hear us!" Said [[User: |
"Shh! Be quiet. They could hear us!" Said [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/Agent 147|someone]]. They are in pitch black and cait see anything. Keys rattle and four bodies move. The first one shows them the way somewhere. The other three then can see. They were in a cave and this guy just freed them. |
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"Okay. Well, my name is T.J.; [[User: |
"Okay. Well, my name is T.J.; [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/T.J. Luther|T.J. Luther]]." said the ten-year person. "And I want the [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/The UNC|UNC]] to pay for putting me down there." |
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"Oh, well me name is [[User: |
"Oh, well me name is [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/Candace Blaine|Candace]]. And I know exactly who will die. Every one of those ninjas. I've been in there for two years," said the only girl. |
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"My name is [[User: |
"My name is [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/Steve Orwall|Steve Orwall]]. Let's go make them pay. Agent 147 did enough to free us. Now we have to give them what they deserve. DEATH!" said the last one. He swam towards the cave above and the others followed. They got in the cave and hid a second. They see some ninjas getting out of class. Steve touches Candace and T.J. and they [[Invisibility|disappear]]. They walk over two young ninjas. T.J. [[Telekinesis|throws]] some kid through a flag pole and blood splurts every where while Candace [[Freezing|freezes]] a different kid. Alarms sound and some older ninjas come out. [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/Gulp Ninja|Gulp Ninja]] even comes out and sees them. He [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/Water Slicing Manipulation|paralyzes]] Candace. Steve catches her, coming into view. T.J. tosses Gulp aside. They all back into a closet and unknowing teleport into [[Yamagato Industries|a building closet]]. T.J. destroys the teleporting device and they ask Candace if she is okay. |
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They stay in that closet for a little bit and talk. Candace swears she will kill Gulp for doing this to her. Steve says that Gulp was actually interrogating him [[User: |
They stay in that closet for a little bit and talk. Candace swears she will kill Gulp for doing this to her. Steve says that Gulp was actually interrogating him [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/Novel One/Interrogation|when]] he was taken to the jail by [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/Seasion Caramine|Seasion]]. After letting Candace catch up her breath, they exit the closet. They realize that they are in Yamagato buildings. [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/Kaito Nakamura|Some guy]] comes up and hand cuffs Steve, but T.J. throws him away and they run. Sounds alarm there too, and they murder two more people. Steve makes them invisible until they get out in the streets. They then walk into a restaurant and sit. By now it is around 11:00 A.M. |
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Meanwhile, Gulp has ordered a team to get the |
Meanwhile, Gulp has ordered a team to get the Trio. He had ordered Agent 147 to help get them but he refuses. Gulp is about to yell at him, when Agent 147 charms him using a spell to make him forget about it. They swam up to the surface and have split up. Kaito has also sent out people to catch the Trio. In the restautrant, one of Kaito's men decides to look in there. There are two tables with two boys and one girl, so he chooses the ones that looks out of breath. He walks over and says, "Hello, my name is [[User:Danko/John Millard|John Millard]]. Is there anyway you can help my friend outside?" They follow John outside and they see a man having trouble with his car. "It over heated. Is there any way you could cool it down," he pointed at Candace and took out his gun. Steve touches the two and they turn invisible. They start to run but Steve looses contact with T.J. and John sees him. He runs after T.J. |
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Gulp sees them running and then sees Candace appear. He jumps over a crowd of people after Candace. Steve jumps up and grabs Candace. He glides over and tackles T.J. into an alley. "There is a man waiting for me three blocks from here. He is the leader of the group against the UNC, the LCK. If you want to come you can, but we need to get there and meet him. By this time, John has turned down the alley. The three run and then turn onto another street. John fires his gun and they jump, some other lady gets shot. When the three come back down to the ground, T.J. has to throw someone against the wall so he stays invisible. That man gets thrown into a railing on the second floor of a building and falls down on John, making him loose the |
Gulp sees them running and then sees Candace appear. He jumps over a crowd of people after Candace. Steve jumps up and grabs Candace. He glides over and tackles T.J. into an alley. "There is a man waiting for me three blocks from here. He is the leader of the group against the UNC, [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/The LCK|the LCK]]. If you want to come you can, but we need to get there and meet him. By this time, John has turned down the alley. The three run and then turn onto another street. John fires his gun and they jump, some other lady gets shot. When the three come back down to the ground, T.J. has to throw someone against the wall so he stays invisible. That man gets thrown into a railing on the second floor of a building and falls down on John, making him loose the Trio. |
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In the alley, [[User: |
In the alley, [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/King Rosko|the leader]] waits for them. They turn the corner and turn visible. They stop running at the leader's feet. Steve stands behind the leader and the leader says, "King Rosko wants to know who these people are." |
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"King Rosko understands. Here is the LCK's card if you want to join." King Rosko says. He [[User: |
"King Rosko understands. Here is the LCK's card if you want to join." King Rosko says. He [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/Mortal Detection|uses his sparkely ray]] to make Steve disappear, and the King jumps up over the building. T.J. and Candace talk about how they don't know what to do now. They say they know of one thing they can do. They walk towards the Sea of Japan. King Rosko is then shown watching them from on top of the building. |
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'' '''The End.''' '' |
'' '''The End.''' '' |
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==[[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/Character Appearances|Charatcer Appearances]]== |
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*[[User:Iheartheroes/Agent 147|Agent 147]] (4) |
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*'''[[User:Iheartheroes/Gulp Ninja Recurring Characters#T.J. Luther|T.J. Luther]]''' (1) |
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*[[User:Iheartheroes/Gulp Ninja Recurring Characters#Candace Blaine|Candice Blaine]] (2) |
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*'''[[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/T.J. Luther|T.J. Luther]]''' (1) |
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*[[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/Steve Orwall|Steve Orwall]] (2) |
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*[[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/Kaito Nakamura|Kaito]] (3) |
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*'''[[User:Danko/John Millard|John Millard]]''' (1) |
*'''[[User:Danko/John Millard|John Millard]]''' (1) |
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*'''Car trouble man''' (1) |
*'''Car trouble man''' (1) |
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*[[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/King Rosko|King Rosko]] (2) |
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==Scrcrambled Eggs Nominations== |
==Scrcrambled Eggs Nominations== |
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*[[Flint Gordon, Jr.]] is this story's Scrambled Egg. Flint Gordon, Jr. gets this [[Awards|award]] because he was an escapee of the Company, much like this new trio. |
*[[Flint Gordon, Jr.]] is this story's Scrambled Egg. Flint Gordon, Jr. gets this [[Awards|award]] because he was an escapee of the Company, much like this new trio. |
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==Notes== |
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==New story checklist== |
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*When this story came out, a special announcement was used to advertise the series. It can be seen in the first blue box at the top of the page. |
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_X_ Update [[User:Iheartheroes/Gulp Ninja Series/Template|Gulp Ninja Series Template]]<br /> |
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===Character Updates=== |
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_X_ [[User:Iheartheroes/Agent 147|Agent 147]] <br /> |
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N/A [[User:Iheartheroes/Denise Black|Denise]] <br /> |
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N/A [[User:Iheartheroes/Carl Acking|Carl]] <br /> |
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N/A [[User:Iheartheroes/Jamie Black|Jamie]]<br /> |
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N/A [[User:Catalyst/Jordan Hayes|Jordan]]<br /> |
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_X_ [[User:Iheartheroes/Seasion Caramine|Seasion]] (mentioned) <br /> |
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_X_ [[User:Iheartheroes/Gulp Ninja Series#Organizations/Places|Groups and Places]] <br /> |
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*The Trio <br /> |
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_X_ [[User:Iheartheroes/Gulp Ninja/Character Appearances|Appearances]] <br /> |
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___ [[User:Iheartheroes/The UNC|The UNC]] <br /> |
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___ Update [[User:Iheartheroes/Gulp Ninja Recurring Characters|Recurring Characters]] as appropriate <br /> |
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___ T.J. Luther <br /> |
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___ Steve Orwall <br /> |
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___ Candace Blaine <br /> |
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___ Kaito Nakamura <br /> |
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___ [[User:Iheartheroes/John Millard|John]] <br /> |
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_X_ Update [[User:Iheartheroes/Gulp Ninja Series#Abilities|Abilities]] <br /> |
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_X_ [[User:Iheartheroes/Water Slicing Manipulation|WSM]] <br /> |
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_X_ [[User:Iheartheroes/Mortal Detection|MD]] <br /> |
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_X_ [[Telekinesis|TK]] <br /> |
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_X_ [[Accelerated probability]] <br /> |
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_X_ [[Invisibility]] <br /> |
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_X_ [[Freezing]] <br /> |
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Timeline<br /> |
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N/A Update [[User:Iheartheroes/Gulp Ninja#Character History|timeline]] section<br /> |
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N/A [[User:Iheartheroes/Pizza Mejor|Pizza Mejor]]<br /> |
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Latest revision as of 19:29, 8 January 2010
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| A new villain trio is formed while a new evolved human hunter comes into the story line in the epic new story in the Glup-Ninja Series! |
Charmed is a story about Gulp Ninja's life.
(The eighth story in the Gulp-Ninja Series)
Summary
- A member is returned to the LCK.
- Gulp and Kaito makes orders to catch the Trio, which is formed by the only three prisoners in the history of the UNC escape.
Story Development
| T.J. Luther · Telekinesis · The Trio · John Millard |
Synopsis
THE YEAR IS 2004. (Respectively 2 months before the UNC explosion.)
"Shh! Be quiet. They could hear us!" Said someone. They are in pitch black and cait see anything. Keys rattle and four bodies move. The first one shows them the way somewhere. The other three then can see. They were in a cave and this guy just freed them.
"Thank you for freeing us. I've been in there for ten years," said one of the two guys.
"No problem! But I have got to go!" said the escapist and raced away as if he had to be somewhere fast.
"Okay. Well, my name is T.J.; T.J. Luther." said the ten-year person. "And I want the UNC to pay for putting me down there."
"Oh, well me name is Candace. And I know exactly who will die. Every one of those ninjas. I've been in there for two years," said the only girl.
"My name is Steve Orwall. Let's go make them pay. Agent 147 did enough to free us. Now we have to give them what they deserve. DEATH!" said the last one. He swam towards the cave above and the others followed. They got in the cave and hid a second. They see some ninjas getting out of class. Steve touches Candace and T.J. and they disappear. They walk over two young ninjas. T.J. throws some kid through a flag pole and blood splurts every where while Candace freezes a different kid. Alarms sound and some older ninjas come out. Gulp Ninja even comes out and sees them. He paralyzes Candace. Steve catches her, coming into view. T.J. tosses Gulp aside. They all back into a closet and unknowing teleport into a building closet. T.J. destroys the teleporting device and they ask Candace if she is okay.
They stay in that closet for a little bit and talk. Candace swears she will kill Gulp for doing this to her. Steve says that Gulp was actually interrogating him when he was taken to the jail by Seasion. After letting Candace catch up her breath, they exit the closet. They realize that they are in Yamagato buildings. Some guy comes up and hand cuffs Steve, but T.J. throws him away and they run. Sounds alarm there too, and they murder two more people. Steve makes them invisible until they get out in the streets. They then walk into a restaurant and sit. By now it is around 11:00 A.M.
Meanwhile, Gulp has ordered a team to get the Trio. He had ordered Agent 147 to help get them but he refuses. Gulp is about to yell at him, when Agent 147 charms him using a spell to make him forget about it. They swam up to the surface and have split up. Kaito has also sent out people to catch the Trio. In the restautrant, one of Kaito's men decides to look in there. There are two tables with two boys and one girl, so he chooses the ones that looks out of breath. He walks over and says, "Hello, my name is John Millard. Is there anyway you can help my friend outside?" They follow John outside and they see a man having trouble with his car. "It over heated. Is there any way you could cool it down," he pointed at Candace and took out his gun. Steve touches the two and they turn invisible. They start to run but Steve looses contact with T.J. and John sees him. He runs after T.J.
Gulp sees them running and then sees Candace appear. He jumps over a crowd of people after Candace. Steve jumps up and grabs Candace. He glides over and tackles T.J. into an alley. "There is a man waiting for me three blocks from here. He is the leader of the group against the UNC, the LCK. If you want to come you can, but we need to get there and meet him. By this time, John has turned down the alley. The three run and then turn onto another street. John fires his gun and they jump, some other lady gets shot. When the three come back down to the ground, T.J. has to throw someone against the wall so he stays invisible. That man gets thrown into a railing on the second floor of a building and falls down on John, making him loose the Trio.
In the alley, the leader waits for them. They turn the corner and turn visible. They stop running at the leader's feet. Steve stands behind the leader and the leader says, "King Rosko wants to know who these people are."
"This is T.J. Luther and Candace Blaine. They hate the UNC too but don't know if they want to join the LCK." Steve replies.
"It's nothing against you, I just have some unfinished business to take care of with T.J. and then we might join. We don't know yet." Candace said in a very polite manner.
"King Rosko understands. Here is the LCK's card if you want to join." King Rosko says. He uses his sparkely ray to make Steve disappear, and the King jumps up over the building. T.J. and Candace talk about how they don't know what to do now. They say they know of one thing they can do. They walk towards the Sea of Japan. King Rosko is then shown watching them from on top of the building.
The End.
Charatcer Appearances
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Scrcrambled Eggs Nominations
- Flint Gordon, Jr. is this story's Scrambled Egg. Flint Gordon, Jr. gets this award because he was an escapee of the Company, much like this new trio.
Notes
- When this story came out, a special announcement was used to advertise the series. It can be seen in the first blue box at the top of the page.