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''' ''The Heard'' ''' is a |
''' ''The Heard'' ''' is a [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/Vignette|vignette]] about [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/Gulp Ninja|Gulp Ninja]]'s life. |
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(The first vignette in the [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series|Gulp-Ninja Series]]) |
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''' ''THE YEAR IS YEAR NUMBER.'' ''' |
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*[[User:Catalyst/Jordan Hayes|Jordan]] tries to control his [[Enhanced hearing|ability]]. |
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*A new [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/Vincent Thomas|hero]] comes with a form of [[rapid cellular regeneration]]. |
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''' ''THE YEAR IS 2003.'' ''' (Respectively before the date of the story, ''[[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/Novel One/Interrogation|Interrogation]]'') |
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My name is [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/Jordan Hayes|Jordan Hayes]].<br /> |
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When I was really little, my twin sister always comforted me. Suzan was my best friend. She would tell me everything; women problems, guy troubles, bad grades, it didn't matter. We were never apart. |
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There was only one guy in her life besides me that I approved of. [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/John Millard|John]]. I wish I could see her again. I love my sister, I hope she thinks about me, or tries to find me. |
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But she can't because I'm down here. Hiding under ground. I'm hiding from these companies trying to recruit me. [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/The UNC|The UNC]], [[The Company|Primatech]], [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/The LCK|the LCK]], [[Pinehearst]]. John is protecting me from Primatech. And [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/Vincent Thomas|Vincent]]. |
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Vincent is teaching me to protect myself from these groups. He is teaching me to control my [[Enhanced hearing|ability]]. Vincent Thomas. I'm going to him right now. I'm on a subway and [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/Gulp Ninja|some guy]] just sat down next to me. |
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Update/add other articles:<br /> |
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___ Update [[User:Iheartheroes/Gulp Ninja Series/Template|Gulp Ninja Series Template]]<br /> |
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___ Update Subscribed User's talk page ([[User talk:Iheartheroes/Gulp Ninja Series|Subscriptions]])<br /> |
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___ Clean up [[User:Iheartheroes/Gulp Ninja Series/Spoilers|Spoiler]] page <br /> |
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This guy has introduced himself to me as...Gulp? I don't know. That is a weird name. I [[Enhanced hearing|hear]] the subway engineer calling "STOP!" really loud. |
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"We're gonna crash!" I yelled and jumped up. Gulp pulled me back down and told me to quit joking. The subway jolted to a stop and five minutes later we were moving again. I didn't speak until we stopped at the station. Gulp was just looking at me weird. When I got off, Gulp came up behind me and asked how I knew that. I walked away fast; but he just ran up in front of me. |
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===Character Updates=== |
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___ [[User:Iheartheroes/Agent 147|Agent 147]] <br /> |
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___ [[User:Iheartheroes/Denise Black|Denise]] <br /> |
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___ [[User:Iheartheroes/Carl Acking|Carl]] <br /> |
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___ [[User:Iheartheroes/Gulp Ninja|Gulp]] <br /> |
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___ [[User:Iheartheroes/Jamie Black|Jamie]]<br /> |
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___ [[User:Iheartheroes/Seasion Caramine|Seasion]] <br /> |
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"Look!" he said. He [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/Water Slicing Manipulation|tossed a drop of water at a wall]]. "I have an [[ability]] too!" I looked at him weird and he handed me a card. He then walked away and I looked at the card. |
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I am now running to Vincent becuase that card was a UNC card. When I reached him, he said "Your ability is manifesting rapidly and others can notice. You need to learn how to fight faster. Take me down." I punched him. He flew back and scraped his bare chest, face, arms, and legs across the ground. I asked him why he never has scrapes or bruises. |
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___ [[User:Iheartheroes/Gulp Ninja Series#Organizations/Places|Groups and Places]] <br /> |
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___ [[User:Iheartheroes/The UNC|The UNC]] <br /> |
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Slowly, he staggered to his feet and said, "My ability of [[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/Friction Diminishment|friction diminishment]]." I looked at his chest, nothing but his six pack. His face was perfectly bruiseless, not a scratch on his legs nor arms. "Now try and take me again. These companies are after you strong." |
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===Character/Reference/Powers Updates=== |
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___ Update [[User:Iheartheroes/Gulp Ninja Recurring Characters|Recurring Characters]] as appropriate <br /> |
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___ Update [[User:Iheartheroes/Gulp Ninja Series#Abilities|Abilities]] <br /> |
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___ [[User:Iheartheroes/Water Slicing Manipulation|WSM]] <br /> |
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Timeline<br /> |
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*'''[[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/Jordan Hayes|Jordan Hayes]]''' (1) |
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*'''Suzan Hayes''' (1) |
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*'''[[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/John Millard|John Millard]]''' (1) |
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*'''[[User:Gulp-Ninja Series/Vincent Thomas|Vincent Thomas]]''' (1) |
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Latest revision as of 16:59, 6 January 2010
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The Heard is a vignette about Gulp Ninja's life.
(The first vignette in the Gulp-Ninja Series)
| Is Jordan ever heard? |
Summary
- Jordan tries to control his ability.
- A new hero comes with a form of rapid cellular regeneration.
Story Development
| Vincent Thomas · Friction diminishment |
Synopsis
THE YEAR IS 2003. (Respectively before the date of the story, Interrogation)
My name is Jordan Hayes.
When I was really little, my twin sister always comforted me. Suzan was my best friend. She would tell me everything; women problems, guy troubles, bad grades, it didn't matter. We were never apart.
There was only one guy in her life besides me that I approved of. John. I wish I could see her again. I love my sister, I hope she thinks about me, or tries to find me.
But she can't because I'm down here. Hiding under ground. I'm hiding from these companies trying to recruit me. The UNC, Primatech, the LCK, Pinehearst. John is protecting me from Primatech. And Vincent.
Vincent is teaching me to protect myself from these groups. He is teaching me to control my ability. Vincent Thomas. I'm going to him right now. I'm on a subway and some guy just sat down next to me.
This guy has introduced himself to me as...Gulp? I don't know. That is a weird name. I hear the subway engineer calling "STOP!" really loud.
"We're gonna crash!" I yelled and jumped up. Gulp pulled me back down and told me to quit joking. The subway jolted to a stop and five minutes later we were moving again. I didn't speak until we stopped at the station. Gulp was just looking at me weird. When I got off, Gulp came up behind me and asked how I knew that. I walked away fast; but he just ran up in front of me.
"Look!" he said. He tossed a drop of water at a wall. "I have an ability too!" I looked at him weird and he handed me a card. He then walked away and I looked at the card.
I am now running to Vincent becuase that card was a UNC card. When I reached him, he said "Your ability is manifesting rapidly and others can notice. You need to learn how to fight faster. Take me down." I punched him. He flew back and scraped his bare chest, face, arms, and legs across the ground. I asked him why he never has scrapes or bruises.
Slowly, he staggered to his feet and said, "My ability of friction diminishment." I looked at his chest, nothing but his six pack. His face was perfectly bruiseless, not a scratch on his legs nor arms. "Now try and take me again. These companies are after you strong."
The End.
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