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“Aarrgghh” shrieked Gabriel, in severe pain. “Stop it! You’re killing him” screamed Jenny, “He can’t stop” replied a panicked Claude, “Jack’s got him, he’s not in control, we need to find a way to stop him or he could kill Gabriel”. Claude takes in what is happening for a few moments, but seeing how much pain Gabriel was in, he couldn't take it anymore. He ran to the fireplace and grabbed his gun "I am sorry Irony but it has to be done" said Claude moments before he smashed the gun into Irony, knocking him out. “Right Jack's gone” said Claude, solemnly, “he can’t stay in unconscious beings, they have to be conscious or dead”. Just then Derek and Officer Bonkin returned, "You missed all the fun" said Claude. "This isn't the time to be sarcastic Claude" yelled a worried Jenny. "What on earth happened?" asked Bonkin, "Our friend Jack is more powerful than we thought" replied Claude. “We need to get them to hospital, but what are we going to tell them” asked Derek, “Anything, just say they got into a fight” replied Claude “We just need to help them”. |
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Three days later, St. Grays Hospital. “How is he?” said Jenny, “He’s out of it” said Claude “hasn’t been awake since Monday, Irony’s been on and off, it just depends on his medication, he’ll be up soon though”. “This should never have happened” said Bonkin, “I should never have let this happen, after all the years, I should of recognised a when it is too dangerous”. “It’s not your fault” said Jenny. “The only thing that I’m worried about is avGabriel’s ability loss, he hasn’t healed, his abilities may be gone for good”. “Crap”, said a voice from behind them, “You’re up” said Derek, “How are you? Do you feel alright?” “I’m Okay, but what about Gabriel? Why have his abilities gone?” “Well, you used your power on him so much, they could be gone for good”. Meanwhile, on the other side of the borough, Gabriel’s ex-company partner was walking down the road. Suddenly, he stopped, “That’s strange” he thought, “Owl’s are nocturnal, you don’t normally see them at this time of the day”, he walked round the corner, in the direction of the hospital, and thought nothing of it. Back in the room, Claude, Jenny and Derek surrounded Irony’s bed. “” |
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Three days later, at [[User:Cockney Heroes/Places/St. Grays Hospital|St. Grays Hospital]]. “How is he?” asked Jenny, “He’s still out of it” said Claude “He hasn't been awake since Monday and Irony’s been on and off/ I think it just depends on his medication but hopefully he’ll be up soon though”. “This should never have happened” said Bonkin, “I should never have let this happen, after hunting dangerous criminals, I should of recognised a when it is too dangerous situation”. “It’s not your fault” said Jenny. "Unfortunately I have the feeling that Irony's ability may do some lasting damage" said Derek. "I agree, Irony's ability allows him to depower an ability, but he has never let his ability stay on a person for so long, Gabriel may lose all of his abilities" replied Claude. “Well I don't care, shouldn't him surviving and being all right have more precedence over his abilities?”. “What's going on?”, said a voice from behind them, “You’re up” said Derek, “How are you? Do you feel alright?” asked Jenny “I’m Okay, but what was that about Gabriel? I have taken his abilities away?” “Well, you used your power on him so much, they could be gone for good”. |
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Meanwhile, on the other side of the hospital, Gabriel’s ex-company partner Frederick was walking down the road to the hospital. Suddenly, he stopped, "What on earth?" he thought "Owls? owls in the day time, I hate owls, there my worst fear", he shivered but was close to the hospital doors so sped up and thought nothing more of it. But when he entered the hospital the shadows moved around him, until one turned into a man. "What th...." was all Frederick could say before Jack possessed him. |
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Back in Irony's hospital room, Claude, Jenny and Derek still surrounded Irony’s bed. Officer Bonkin had to leave as there had been another murder. The remaining members stayed to keep Irony company and to calm him down after the realisation that Gabriel could lose all of his abilities. "It will be fine" said Jenny, "He will come to terms with it" replied Derek. "But I took away the one thing he loved, his ability", "There was nothing you could have done, Irony. You were possessed by the fake Jack the ripper, you had no control" replied Claude. "I think someone should go sit with him, he might wake up", "I will go" replied Jenny "It's only opposite, so I will shout if he wakes up" Jenny made her way across the hallway to Gabriel's room, where he lay with wires and tubes coming off him. Jenny sat in the chair next to him and read a magazine. "I think you should get some more rest Irony" said a worried Derek and Claude, "I am fine, I have had enough rest lately" he replied. Just then all the lights went off. "What's going on?", "I don't know but I don't like it" replied Claude. "Don't hospital's have back up generators?" asked Derek as he said it the light came back on. "Did you miss me?" asked a familiar voice. "Frederick? how did you get in here? the door was shut", "I used my new ability" "what ability? your ability is pyrokinesis", "I think we have a problem, this isn't Frederick its Jack" shouted Claude as he turned invisible. "Die" shouted Derek as he sent an electricity bolt flying at Frederick who simply disappeared into the shadows, suddenly a fireball was sent towards Derek who was hit. |
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Ambush from an Outside Source
The Bones
Argghh Shouted Gabriel in pain, Stop It your killing him said Jenny she put her arm on Irony and put him to sleep (Note :Activation) He's gone shouted claude.We need to take him to hospital said Derek.
3 Days later.... St Grays Hosptial
How is he said Jenny, He's totaly out said claude and Irony repsonded Derek, the same said claude in a sad tone, This should never of happened said DI Bonkins. Its not your fault said Jenny, By the looks of things it seems Gabriel has completely lost his powers said Derek. Oh my he'll be mad said Irony in his bed. U woke up then said Claude, Im so sorry said Irony, Its not your fault said Jenny, Fear can do anything to you. Still i shouldnt have been lousy, Is Gabriel okay? He's out cold and he lost his Abilities said Claude . Oh god im so sorry Said Irony. At that very moment Ex Company agent Frederick Davies was strolling outside The hospital When he saw a strange figure come out of the shadows , Hello who are you ? Im called Jack and your my prey said Jack as he zoomed in on his Target in the Dingy Dark Knight.Hello whats your name said the hospital Secutary, Mr Davies im here to see Mr Bishop. Oh he is on the 5th floor, thank u said Jack, We should go said Derek Okay said claude we ought to ... But at that very moment the hospital's power shortened out. Whats happening said Irony, Im not sure said claude, Look theres a flame at the end ward, Hello said jenny ,Oh no said a nearly asleep Gabriel, Frederick Said claude what are you doing here. Thats not Frederick Said Irony, He's right ITS JACK jack said as he dissapeard into the darkness , RUN said Derek, we cant leave Gabriel Here said Claude .What do we do said a frightned Jenny almost in tears . There you are you Prat said derek As he saw the shadow And threw a eledctric bolt. Jenny ran next to Gabriel's Bedside as the CH's tried to stop Jack.You are the only one who can save us said Jenny she touched Gabriel and he woke up,Oh ello said Gabriel Look said jenny i can give you your power back without any pain i know you had, how said gabriel, look just listen this is goin to urt said jenny And touched him again. ARGHHHHHHHHHH he shouted. See Said Jack you petty humans think your heroes, But the truth is .... Your Not , Oi said Gabriel Your hurting my freinds .Gabriel then sent a powerful Eletronic blast At jack throwing him out of the window. Gabriel Shouted everyone. You couldnt get rid of me said a proud Gabriel.
3 weeks later So no sign of Jack Then said Claude in the warehouse, yep said Bonkins thanks to you lot.Thanks said everyone. You really are Heroes . Claude smiled and said this is the start of a beautiful freindship. Indeed said Gabriel with his arm around Jenny. While Irony and Derek smiled . End Of Volume 1
Volume 2 Fugitives In The Shadows Claude did u leave the door open said Irony, no why said Claude because its .... At that moment the government all came in and tazered The group. We got the first english ones said danko on the phone Great said Nathan Petrelli TO BE CONTINUED
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“Aarrgghh” shrieked Gabriel, in severe pain. “Stop it! You’re killing him” screamed Jenny, “He can’t stop” replied a panicked Claude, “Jack’s got him, he’s not in control, we need to find a way to stop him or he could kill Gabriel”. Claude takes in what is happening for a few moments, but seeing how much pain Gabriel was in, he couldn't take it anymore. He ran to the fireplace and grabbed his gun "I am sorry Irony but it has to be done" said Claude moments before he smashed the gun into Irony, knocking him out. “Right Jack's gone” said Claude, solemnly, “he can’t stay in unconscious beings, they have to be conscious or dead”. Just then Derek and Officer Bonkin returned, "You missed all the fun" said Claude. "This isn't the time to be sarcastic Claude" yelled a worried Jenny. "What on earth happened?" asked Bonkin, "Our friend Jack is more powerful than we thought" replied Claude. “We need to get them to hospital, but what are we going to tell them” asked Derek, “Anything, just say they got into a fight” replied Claude “We just need to help them”.
Three days later, at St. Grays Hospital. “How is he?” asked Jenny, “He’s still out of it” said Claude “He hasn't been awake since Monday and Irony’s been on and off/ I think it just depends on his medication but hopefully he’ll be up soon though”. “This should never have happened” said Bonkin, “I should never have let this happen, after hunting dangerous criminals, I should of recognised a when it is too dangerous situation”. “It’s not your fault” said Jenny. "Unfortunately I have the feeling that Irony's ability may do some lasting damage" said Derek. "I agree, Irony's ability allows him to depower an ability, but he has never let his ability stay on a person for so long, Gabriel may lose all of his abilities" replied Claude. “Well I don't care, shouldn't him surviving and being all right have more precedence over his abilities?”. “What's going on?”, said a voice from behind them, “You’re up” said Derek, “How are you? Do you feel alright?” asked Jenny “I’m Okay, but what was that about Gabriel? I have taken his abilities away?” “Well, you used your power on him so much, they could be gone for good”.
Meanwhile, on the other side of the hospital, Gabriel’s ex-company partner Frederick was walking down the road to the hospital. Suddenly, he stopped, "What on earth?" he thought "Owls? owls in the day time, I hate owls, there my worst fear", he shivered but was close to the hospital doors so sped up and thought nothing more of it. But when he entered the hospital the shadows moved around him, until one turned into a man. "What th...." was all Frederick could say before Jack possessed him.
Back in Irony's hospital room, Claude, Jenny and Derek still surrounded Irony’s bed. Officer Bonkin had to leave as there had been another murder. The remaining members stayed to keep Irony company and to calm him down after the realisation that Gabriel could lose all of his abilities. "It will be fine" said Jenny, "He will come to terms with it" replied Derek. "But I took away the one thing he loved, his ability", "There was nothing you could have done, Irony. You were possessed by the fake Jack the ripper, you had no control" replied Claude. "I think someone should go sit with him, he might wake up", "I will go" replied Jenny "It's only opposite, so I will shout if he wakes up" Jenny made her way across the hallway to Gabriel's room, where he lay with wires and tubes coming off him. Jenny sat in the chair next to him and read a magazine. "I think you should get some more rest Irony" said a worried Derek and Claude, "I am fine, I have had enough rest lately" he replied. Just then all the lights went off. "What's going on?", "I don't know but I don't like it" replied Claude. "Don't hospital's have back up generators?" asked Derek as he said it the light came back on. "Did you miss me?" asked a familiar voice. "Frederick? how did you get in here? the door was shut", "I used my new ability" "what ability? your ability is pyrokinesis", "I think we have a problem, this isn't Frederick its Jack" shouted Claude as he turned invisible. "Die" shouted Derek as he sent an electricity bolt flying at Frederick who simply disappeared into the shadows, suddenly a fireball was sent towards Derek who was hit.
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| V1: Teething Problems |
Hidden in the Darkness • Nemesis • How to Stop an Exploding Van • Pinehearst • Company Men • Requiem of a Prison Break • Jack the Ripper • Murder at Whitechapel • Ambush from an Outside Source |
| V2: Baptism of Fire |
Veni Vidi Expugnavi • Shark of the Streets • Imprisoned • Live Together, Die Alone • Déjà Vu • Sliding Doors • Shattered Lives • The Wanderer Returns • Midas Touch • Room 410 • Kill or Be Killed • The Die Is Cast
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Dave Rogers: 1 - 2 - 3 • Derek Simmonds: 1 - 2 - 3 • Pam Marshall: 1 - 2 - 3 • Karl Hall: 1 - 2
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Nissan Cube • Golden Board • Food Tray • Karl's Journal • Van |
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| The Team: Irony • Leckie • Radicell • Danko • Gabriel Bishop • Altes • See Also: Catalyst • Laughingdevilboy |
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